This is shitty and edgy, no thanks

can you put my OC in? It's an easy one, shadow from another dimension. Much smarter, perfect photographic memory, god form above hyper form, and is an expert in robotics.

This feels so wrong somehow. Did Unknown let himself get captured? As far as I remember,there was nothing saying that he was nerfed in any way.
Unknown: Little did you know, I underpowered myself on purpose this time.
Works for me I guess.
Still, you gotta try and work on grammar and punctuation. The way it's structured is a little wierd.
That and you put "chaptet" instead of chapter.
And spacing out the authors notes and the actual chapter also helps. Especially since there's not much separating them.
Not saying you gotta be perfect, and I'll cut you some slack for being gone for so long, but you gotta see these things before you upload them.
While it was a little short, you gotta work your way back up a little at a time I guess.
Unknown: Let's get this over with then. Good luck!

Sophia:GUESS WHOS BACK! Back AGAIN!
Nick: Man, Ashley would have loved this chapter, if she was still here that is.
Sophia: She said she would be visiting over Spring Break which is AWESOME
Nick: Great job, dude, your story really is coming along. And you're right, finish what you started.
Sophia: YYYYAAAAYYYYY :)

Wow... I know people got annoyed with CopyCat, but just... Wow. Cutting and stuff... Just no. I hope she gets better, and has turned over a new leaf. I see that high school is taking time away from you, trust me I know. Being in Year 8 means lack of FanFiction. That's why I moved to Wattpad.

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Ashley: Wait, you know copy cat? Oh god...
Sophia:Oh god indeed! She's like, Ashley's enemy!
Ashley:She isn't my enemy, just a person I don't LIKE.
Sophia:Wait, she's cutting herself? OMG Lord help her! Hope she gets better.
Ashley:Yeah, I guess.
Sophia:Of course Ashley can recover from a knife wound, she is ASHLEY TIGERS.
Ashley:No need to brag...
Sophia:LOL

REALLY? YOU KNOW HER? COOL.
Wow...the odds of that...just wow.
Hope she's doing well.
But now then, hope all goes well. Should read this earlier :p
Hmm...Metal Gear.
For no reason.
Good luck!

I just want you to know that the reason that Spencer Ricardo my male gorilla character is 9,000 pounds & Noah Thompson my male panda bear character is 6,000 pounds is because it's all muscles & not fat. I hope that clears up that misunderstanding. BTW if you ever need them for any of your upcoming stories please go ahead & use them & FYI you never need my permission to use them because you can use them anytime for free just as long as they stay males, neutral characters, & no jeans. I totally can't wait until the next chapter because i totally have a really bad feeling that Stunk Cabbage is going to show up & make life like hell for Sonic like he always does. Will Sonic ever tell the main 6 that King Sombra is really his father? What other secrets could Sonic be hiding?

You stole my idea

Hi. I can't be bothered to sign in. Also, I made a mistake. My brother has 2k14 not 2k15... Stupid keyboard! And is Unknown being OP...? *glares at Unknown* I don't think he knows that being OP ticks me off...

Epic or not? EPIC! And I am serious when I say that your getting better! And mabey celestia didnt attack Hera was because she was scared. I sure do hope I didn't get seriously injured, since what I read about Hera and a black rose could equal a big punch.

Ashley: Wait! Hold it, hold it, hold it, did I just get knocked out by a knife?
Sophia: OMG!
Ashley: How does that happen?
Sophia: I know right? First she was all like this then all like that then she's on the floor...one thing to say is...AWESOME! LOL!
Ashley: Hehe...now looking at the shout outs ( starts cracking knuckles) that makes me want to punch something...
Sophia: Oh no...
Ashley: (Grabs a Sonic Plushy) DIE, DIE, DIE, DIE, DIE, DIE! YOU BLUE RAT! I KILL YOU! DIE!
Sophia:(Sweat drops) Oh dear...anyways MOVING ON!
Ashley: (Stops beating up Sonic Plushy(Which is now in little blue and white pieces)): Fine, and of course, Comet steals the show.
Sophia: Unknown being as awesome as always ;)
Ashley: Ok...and did Hera just beat up Misty, HECK NO!
Sophia: THIS MEANS WAR! C'MON DERPY!
Derpy: MUFFINS!

Hey dude, Happy Birthday & BTW the story is great & have a HOWLING! awesome day. I also want to say that i to had been to The Golden Corral with my father here in my home state of Idaho.

Unknown: Yes. Think about it...
I probably should have seen that reference before :p
Unknown: HOW DID I GET HERE?
How'd you get knocked out?
Unknown: I don't know, to be honest.
Well...that's certainly surprising.
Anyway, good luck!

I know I keep saying this, but AWESOME! I hope so about perfect chaos, but I also hope he came back to his senses. As for the triangle war, us heroes of course! I can't believe Celestia is still trying to kill Ashley!