| Reviews for A Magician's Mistake |
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   XxElementalStormxX chapter 1 . 11/4/2015 Poor Yugi |
| imshadowgirl chapter 13 . 2/28/2015 Yugi is so adorably oblivious- |
| hummingbird802 chapter 2 . 1/8/2015 Poor yugi, i don't know what to expect next |
| Clovere7 chapter 11 . 11/21/2014 Ah, now I remember. There was a toad that is said to have released all death and illness onto the world, correct? Well then... This should be interesting. Good thing he didn't summon Yomi at first, also, if this is the case! ...But maybe not so good... Ah, we'll just have to wait and see. |
| ThisIsMyParadox chapter 14 . 11/10/2014 Really great work! Love the way it all came out. You have very nice way of writing, and I enjoyed it. |
| Juliet28 chapter 14 . 10/26/2014 LOVE IT THIS WAS A GREAT STORY! :D |
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/19/2014 Emphasis on the word "fun" hint hint ;) and "punishment" |
| Yuu3 chapter 14 . 3/7/2014 Lovely. |
| kit-lelouch ai chapter 15 . 3/7/2014 Lol I still waiting for the sequel to the combined who seeks |
| Mana's Madness chapter 15 . 3/7/2014 I've wanted this since before The Combined Who Seeks, I liker the sound of that plot the most! And since the poll winners were all so brilliant, I have a very good feeling about this story! |
| Black Vampire of the Night16 chapter 14 . 2/28/2014 Oh wow. I really like this. Though, I think it could have been a little longer. Pharaoh: It was a very good story. Short, sweet, and to the point. Don't listen to what ShadowPhantom says. Your story is perfect just the way it is. You're Faithful Readers, ShadowPhantom and Pharaoh |
| YamiHirugashi chapter 14 . 2/28/2014 I signed in to review again XD Holy crap I loved this story! :) It was super cute but too short in my opinion, I wanted more story like why Dartz turned out as he did, Seto and Joey's relationship along with Malik and Bakura's relationship. I wanted to hear more about Yami's past life and what he was like, I wanted to hear what it was like being with the other spirits and how he reacted after he died, and who exactly killed him? I know Yomi was used to kill him but was it just some stranger or someone he angered, you know what I mean? I feel this story could have an amazing sequel and I would surely love one. I have so many things I would love to know that weren't covered in this! PLEASE make a sequel to this! I already voted for "The Dark Puzzle" but I would like to read "The Combined Who Protects", I would love to read that sequel! |
| Yami Hirugashi chapter 14 . 2/28/2014 I loved this story! I'm sad it's over though T_T |
| a chapter 14 . 2/27/2014 That was a wonderful story :) I like the idea of Yugi opening a little potions store - very cute p.s. I want to vote for 'the Knight's Kidnapper' |
| ParadoxRose chapter 14 . 2/27/2014 YAY! Happy ending! Now to vote :D |
