so cuuuute!
write more of them please!

Grammatical errors here and there but other than that, this is too cute for words. Please write more!

It's funny and adorable how Neji refused to speak up at first then suddenly spitting out everything uncontrollably. :) I didn't see that coming but it made me smile.

This was sweet fiction! I could see Neji being confused and Tenten curious...Thanks for NejiTen fic!

"It took all of his self control to not hug her then and there." Loooool! When male characters don't have a reign on their self control it's usually for...more mature reasons so that killed me. XD For someone who doesn't have English as their first language, you write it well. O.O There were a few instances when you switched from past tense to present tense when it seemed like you would have preferred to relate the story in the latter but otherwise the grammar was fine. Though I wish you had developed the story more, allowing it to transition more smoothly so that everything didn't seem so rushed.

Thanks for the read. )

That was perf it made me feel the emotion and the ending is great hope you could make it longer though, because its good haha )

Sooo cute : 3 poor neji : )