Dude update this is a good story.

Good story. I really like it.

Seriously call the Primordial of the Sky Ouranos his Greek name. Also why did you make Calypso the Aphrodite of the Titans?

Okay why did you go with Uranus the Roman name which seems undignified for the primordial of the sky?

There is a mistake in the summary:

His life has just began

It should be:

His life has just begun

'Begun', not 'began'.

He began to eat.
He has begun to eat.
He had begun to eat.
He begins to eat.

There are a lot of mistakes in the first chapter, times where you forgot a letter of a word (on the first line, your write 'It is a Monday afternoon o which', forgetting the second letter 'f' of the word 'of'.

Often you forget to add a dot at the end of a sentence, and in other situations you put capitals just after the dialogue when there shouldn't be:

"Hi." He says. (False)
"Hi," he says. (Correct)

Interesting chapter here.

Love it update soon

Interesting chapter here.

Chapter 7 of (the son of the earth the rise of Olympus) is messed up I can't even read it

Awful grammar can't even tell what half of the words are.

Nice chapter _

I'm quite shocked those two were the spies, I was expecting someone like Ares.
Great chapter here.

Nice!

Good chapter. Interesting to see how the coup goes.

This is great