that's gross. I can tell from earlier that Thalia and Percy were going to... be a thing, but they're cousins, and that's what riles up my stomach...

love it
Story, Plot and everything is correct seem perfect

I really enjoyed this. This is what I really want to feel like while reading a good Fanfiction, and this made my expectations skyrocket! I am very sad that we will have to see this story go, and I wish there would be a part two. But some things are not possible (maybe). Good Fanfiction! I will probably be reading this often :)

Everything fit perfectly enough in the end, quite satisfying, except for one. By how Chaos spoke about it, it sounded like he'd sprout a dragon wing in due time. It would be good, just to balance stuff up, like, some power prevented the 2nd wing from sprouting, so maybe another wing was already seeded. Idk it's not a major shit anyway. Overall, really good.

I love it! The dark,evil,mythology mixup, everything!

The plane nibbas are dead as hell

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What happened to the plane?

Percy’s immortal, right? So... he shouldn’t really age.

Didn’t Percy swear that if he finished training in 5 years, Chaos would bring Annabeth back? You

wait if sally is married to paul, does that mean that sally cheated on paul or did poseidon like sneak in during the night or something

hmm. . .
split personalities, that was a good touch

percy has become a complete badass

pertimes, pertimes, PERTIMES!
kidding

why the fuck did percy have one wing and how could he fly