noooo miyukiiiiiii, que triste, bueno, buen fic amigo/amiga

What should I do, if everytime arrives in another country showing off strength like sparring or testing strength? Shinobi should hide their strength, not show off to everyone haha Tell Orochimaru to destroy Kumo, Iwa, Kirigakure, Suna and Konoha with 5 troops from his research haha

Hahahaha hey idiot ! Orochimaru's experimental subject alone can be that strong and almost beat the legendary Hiraisin ? how silly this fanfic is ! With the overpowering power of Orochimaru's research subjects, the whole world can be destroyed by Orochimaru ... the antagonist is fine ! but the power of research can be that strong. Of course it's too mainstream you fool

I know it's rude to say this but please Grammer check these chapters it's hard to read because I don't get a few sentences (very few but still)if it's not a bother please Grammer check
Thank you very much.

es heißt orioke no jutsu

Very good story, though felt like the ending was a bit too murky. Naruto never really settled down and flirted with the fiance of his friend. Not complaining. Good story.

you always wrote a miserable naruto story where he hardly have any character development. mostly he stays miserable do stupid thing even though we were promise otherwise. but i love your writing, just need to learn proper vocabulary and add more elements in your story.

I'm not sure I like this UN thing. I hate the irl UN they don't actually have help anyone and their peace keeping is dumb . But I hope you can make it work.

Genial

Will naruto to to leaf?

So boring of a story. You turned Naruto into something he is not. The biggest thing is Naruto can NOT go to 3 tail cloak until the Toad Safe loosen his seal during the training trip. Your turning Naruto into another Itachi. A stupid person who is supposed smart. He kills all but his brother them messes with his mind Twice! He turned Sasuke into what his is.

Very good story (with action suspense and some funny moments).
It's good that Naruto gets to fulfill his dreams.
Know you said this story is complete (but a lot of details have either been skipped or I missed them),
Does Temari marry Naruto?
What happened between Naruto and Miyuki?

This is quite interesting.

Wow, what a story. I'm been reading it for a week now and I just have to say, what an amazing story. It was VERY thought out and made Naruto a really thought out character. Especially when in regards to his very human mistake and emotional turmoil. The U.N.-A. Systems were ready ripped from a government textbook on managing a nation and the troubles that stem from it. It was such a great read! Very, Very good job.

To the guy below me, "Oh be quite"