| Reviews for Becoming Mr Black |
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   Yaw6113 chapter 5 . 2/24 Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot. |
| Mac-The-Editor chapter 5 . 4/1/2019 Good starting point. Following just in case you return to it. Cheers! |
| EdTheBeast chapter 5 . 12/15/2018 I really liked the start of this. |
| Ratus chapter 2 . 9/18/2018 Please please update this wonderful tale. |
| hawkswench chapter 5 . 7/4/2018 lol Oh my I do hope you finish this story. Will Daphne hex Luna? Although I am surprised that Hermione didn't do it long ago. |
| mumphie chapter 5 . 3/6/2018 Great story. More please! |
| Nihatclodra chapter 5 . 5/21/2017 This has... potential... if only it wasn't abandoned... |
| Mel chapter 5 . 11/9/2016 The story's good, much better than the most I've been reading as of lately, but there's only one thing missing to make it perfect - an update. Don't leave us hanging. |
| Alrissa chapter 4 . 5/30/2016 Starting off in media res is nice but... Do we need to know anything from chapters 2, 3 and 4? I admit I skipped the second part of chapter 4 and chapter 5 since... Nothing seems to be happening? I'm too tired to give a more detailed critique then this. |
| himalay1729 chapter 5 . 2/8/2016 Eagerly waiting for an update... |
| SomeGuyFawkes chapter 1 . 12/2/2015 Skip. |
| EliteShadow chapter 5 . 11/20/2015 cool story i love it please please update and post more chapters soon! |
| twilliams1797 chapter 5 . 11/14/2015 this is quite intriguing Thank you for sharing.. |
| Ann Jinn chapter 5 . 11/5/2015 This is a very interesting story. Love the combination of Luna, Daphne and Hermione. The hospital and muggle medicine was hilarious. Yes, why put a tube in that area. |
| keichan2 chapter 5 . 11/5/2015 “Daphne, language!” Bwahahahahaha! The more I read, the more I wonder WHY Harry decided to do the ritual in the prologue! Especially as it seems he didn’t warn either Daphne or Hermione… That, and I wonder what Trip has to do with anything! Thanks for the new chapter! I hope to read more soon! |
