This is very interesting and I am enjoying your writing. It has been many years but I would love to see more. Thank you for writing a modern twist that is believable.

I'm a little confused about all of the touching the hair parts, it seemed like they were really enjoying their lesson then Erik went nuts on us. Is Christine already into Raoul and Erik, she kissed Erik. I need to know Erik's pov now, please, it is my Birthday.

I like your Christine too, she seems innocent but not stupidly immature. I cracked up at the 911 on speed dial line. I can only assume and enjoy that she probably saw Erik's eyes protectively watching her walk home. Ok, on to more.

I'm sorry you aren't receiving many reviews, I am enjoying your story so far. Im always bummed to read Raoul's entrance and hope we can shake the fop off the trail, pleasantly. I would like longer chapters because I want to read more of your story/writing. I loved this chapter, you wrote a modern Erik so well and made even his dark history believable and current. I hate Meg calling Christine "Chrissie" too, lol. Ok, on to read more.

weell here is a review for you the story shows promisw but it is still so new thatt there is not much to say dont worry just wriite many folks look over new material but dont write untill further on when they can get into the story line more so dont let that discourage you at all g ood luck

Please update it is a good story! I want to know where it goes!

It's a cute story so far I like it. It would be a shame to end it

Ooh, this looks promising, I can't wait to read Christine's reaction to seeing Erik, and presumably his home. Please continue!

Great starting chapter. I look forward to reading more, mademoiselle.