When will you update this?

Great story! Can't wait to see more about this!

Hey, great story so far! I couldn't help but notice your lack of updates for quite some time now. If you do not want to finish the fanfic, I would be glad to pick it up. If you wish for this to happen, please reply in the story and I will respond with my fanfic username, as I am not signed in on my phone.

A reader, and possibly soon a writer,
Simon

This was extremely rushed. And short. But I understand- Life does come first after all.
I realize this is a Sakura story, but there hasnt been much Sakura interaction has it? Geez- I wanna see her! I wanna! *pouts like a spoiled child*
The third releases Naruto. Team 7 explains everything to Iruka almost immediatly. Kin clone is going to be a prisoner- yey! Somehow Im oddly satisfied. Its because she basically hasnt said or done a thing through the entire fanfic.
Inner Sakura: Youre worse than my outer, faker!

Battle fights arent a strong suit, ha?
Bah- Im sorry. Dont take at as an offence though- I suck at them too. Its a lot more easier to just watch a battle then write about it. Too many positions and moves- you cant make it too complicated but it still has to flow.
Why, hello there to #K0-something. The actually Kins still alive- not bad, not bad. I keep wondering if the clone will just disappear- whenever I hear clone these days I instantly figure Narutos clones- must be right? Wrong. Stupid me.
Im bantering sorry. Inner Sakura is amazing- very good description on what might have happened with the Zabuza fight. Loved it. Wondrful- it really was. In a dark kinda way.

Really creative idea- would it be a bad thing to say I had the very SAME idea like you did? I mean with Sakura getting Orochimaru's curse mark instead. Now Id feel pretty bad for making such a similar story to yours- gaah, Id be killed by your fans!
A couple of spelling mistakes, but few and far in between. I have this urge to say that you went too fast- but really you didnt. I just stretch things out.
Excellent twist with the Kazekage being alive- I keep wondering if the third will survive or how will the kazekage excuse his actions after the entire battle chunin exam thing. Will the alliance be as strong as ever?
Uhhh- Im actually giddy.

Excellent story, please update soon.

I've always wondered about an AU plotline like this.
(And, um, the SOPA thing's a false-alarm again.)

It would be interesting if you turned this fic into a NaruTenKin fic. Please update this excellent story soon!

Nooooo not SOPA! They won't get away with that! D: And hope we have a longer chap next time :)

I still like it! But, umm, with Kin... if theres two of them and one is in Leaf medic custody, hows that gonna work out? Oh, and a darker version of Sakura. Slightly more of a bloodlust kind... maybe? Grins at others pain, laughs at her own? Nah, thats too sadistic? Oh I dunno! Can wait for the next chapter though.

Till then, Bai.

Oooh! I Think You Should Make Sakura Evil And Leave The Village And Work With Orchimaru Because I'm Tired With Sakura Always Being Useless Or Weak...Just An Idea ;)
You Can Use My Idea And Please Make This Story LONG ••

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Also, great story. Liking the plot so far and interested to see how it goes!

Ooo, me likey. Write more por favor? Its good.

Good to hear! I look forward to reading more. Hope to see another update soon!