Great job on their thoughts and feelings. These two tug at my heartstrings.

yesyesyes
these two idiots really need to get together

My heart just go, awwww :3 I love it! Please keep writing more! :)

Awww so sweet... You did a good job there with POVs. Hope they somehow end up together in manga.

aaahhhh I love the alternating points of view! They were both so in-character, and we got to see how similarly they actually thought, and I just. They're such cute flustered idiots ;u;

I love the sentence in your summary. 'the soul that's painted with mischief,' man, it's so descriptive.

Such cute story progression, loved both thought processes. Very in character.
Gleaming blue eyes and a soul full of mischief
awesomeness!

D'awwww. Now this was ADORABLE. One thing though, it's improper writing to switch POVs through parentheses. They are completely unnecessary. Other than that this was a wonderful little vignette.

Just lovely. 3

This was adorable

Aw, that was cute!