I wanted to say that this is probably my favorite depiction of Arya in Fanfiction; you have done a great job of writing her in a way that is rich and complex, but at the same time rings true to the Arya of the original series. The way you incorporated the lasting effects of her torture was also well done. The only thing, really, that puzzled me about this version of Arya was her doing as little as possible to get by while being queen (in the books, she had always had such a high regard for duty).

Arya and Eragon's relationship was well developed; I particularly liked chapter 55.

Although it has been some time since this story was last updated, I do hope that it will be finished one day. The completed chapters have been a pleasure to read, and I would love to see how this story ends. Thank you for all your hard work on it.

But fr tho did you die or what ?

Great story but one mistake... FINISH THIS THING!

Arya just doesn't get a break

How do they even stand a chance against her? Aren't elves like 100 times stronger or smth?

If only we could know where you were

hii.. really loved it.. just one thing though

PLEASE FINISH IT

Come back?

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This is awesome! I love it so much! The writing is well done, the plot is interesting, it’s all so great! Please, I beg you for another chapter! You’ve come so far! AAAAAH IT SO GOOD

Loved this story so much, it's one of my favourite fanfics. I hope u can find the time to update your amazing story.

The combination of the plot and how you’ve slowly built up Eragon and Arya’s relationship makes this an incredible story! I really hope you are going to update again!

Please tell me you are still going to update this?

Never reviewed this chapter I realised. Pretty good as always, ending was a little heartbreaking. Here's hoping you have some wild plot-twist with magic to heal Arya's infertility. ...Or not. Knowing you lol. :P

Hopefully you come back and update this soon!

Hi i just wanted to say i love this story, i just started reading the story and i love it, i hope u update soon, i have feeling that either arya or eragons parents are alive again or i hope so, i hope its either brom or evander

So I had this story in my tabs since the latest chapter was published and I just now finished reading it, lol. I'm not even a busy person, so it's weird.

As for the actual story, I'm glad that we're consistently seeing all of the characters' emotions being thrown around, it makes for a realistic and believable fable, even more impressive given that it takes place with dragons and elves and dwarves. (Oh my!) As I'm sure I've stated in previous reviews, I anticipate your next chapter like a certain ravenous yellow bear anticipates honey.