okay...I was really interested with the summary and thought this was going to help Inuyasha to get stronger or something like that, but then Inuyasha meets two of the OC's and then a group of OC's come and steal the show.

Inuyasha is a strong half demon who won't need help in killing an ape demon, and he is not one to fear and jump back when a stranger glares at him, the part where the girl glared at him? yea.. that wasn't good at all..

then the guy 'scares him lifeless'. that's too much.

Inuyasha even if he's a human, won't chicken out from saving a friend or ally..

your story has gone AWOL with the mention of too much unrealistic (for a fanfiction) and overrated.

sorry I am stopping here. :(

The chapter was fine. However how dare you and these cliffhangers. And I have told you before don't worry about how long it takes to update. We all have busy lives so it's normal to be behind on things that are just for fun. Hell if us writers made money off these stories then that would be different. But for now keep up the great work. And as always I enjoyed the chapter.

Ah, I await your next update. Don't overwork yourself, I know what that's like.

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Ah! Okay, I'm really interested to see where it goes from here. Hm...

Great job. I love the emotional connection you did between InuYasha and the eagle demon. And I can't wait for NEO.

Woah, the ending made it really intense! I wonder what will happen now since the barrier had consumed his attack. Nicely done, I really enjoyed this chapter. My favorite parts consisted of Inuyasha battling between the eagle and how he wanted Suzume and Nobu to stay put where they were.

You are taking forever :(

Wonderful chapter! I enjoyed reading this one. I wonder what kind of demon had caused the death of all the people, if it was the demon that created the crater. And also, I liked that Mina was able to see if Kagome was lying, even if Kagome denied it. She must have felt happy that she had passed the exam. Continue with the great work, I look forward to the next chapter when it comes!

Thank you Extreme, but I think you can tell you're a great writer and getting better. Your style is really great and I'm glad I started reading Loneliness. And met a good friend like you to help support me as well. Even though you don't read some of them you still hear me out. And I really liked the humor you put in this chapter! Keep up the great work my friend :)

Nice fic overall, but still need more character development on the OC...as OC can be very difficult to flesh out since most readers dont like OC's fearing they might take the spotlight from the main characters ...like being too powerful or too special.

I would think in a realistic sense Inuyasha would be more hardened and experienced as he is lived most his life in the wilderness fending for himself and being in the wilderness with all those hardships combined makes one stronger and observant to little detail plus an expert on survival.

In manga canon the sword he had made him powerful and he kept always depending on blasting out windscars than using true form of swordsmanship or form...its like he is only strong coz of his fathers sword only...Sesshomaru survives only with his gifts being pure breed demon dog and unlike Inuyasha he never had to endure hardships in his life...that's the only plausible reason Inuyasha was able to defeat him during their first fight and combined with a purpose he overcame his pompous bro.

The more Inuyasha uses his sword blasting out windscars...the more dependent and weaker he gets without his father sword plus he will certainly become even more weaker than a normal human when entering his rare Human nights. Its like I said...he is still holding his daddy's hand.

Till next update...

-Meech

Now thats a surprise...

Previous chapter you misspelled Jaken for Jawken...Its simply Jaken.

SOTA is in big trouble with some wild school he joined...

Sometime's it kinda erked me on how the final act ended.

Kagome's mother just let her go? Not realizing they would be missing her like forever. It would be same as she being dead...

Fact remains...Sesshomaru never came to Inuyasha's aid until much longer...too late...

I can see why Inutaisho left Sesshomaru's mother. She is seen to be very fake in showing concern or such, I guess Inutaisho got captured by Inuyasha's mom who seem to be caring and a bit more lively than Sesshomaru's mother.

Its EXTREMLY RARE TO find a non bash fic and where characters are portrayed neutral instead of outright immature bashing.

Inuyasha fanfic section is filled with high school fic, Scumbag Inuyasha and saint Kagome plus there is the usual Sess/Kag...hard to find proper fics well written.

Would love to see a different AU fic where Inuyasha with his hardships thinks more and is more observant.