Hi! This story is an absolute masterpiece! I'm hoping you can still finish it although time has passed. I love this.

Cette fic est absolument géniale !

Quand vas tu mettre la suite ?
T_T

Holy shit, this is so great. So, so great. I can't even remember when I read an One Piece Story that was so long, encompassed so much characters of One Piece (even some very recent!) and had a plot so interesting. I will have to reread it some times because my memory is shit and there is SO much going on.
Fics like this are a precious rarity in this fandom and I can't believe it's not more popular. All the characters are explored and the way they interact between themselves feels very canon-like ( it's the polite way to say that I love them). The fact that the writing is very good helps. It's a modern au but I feel that it mantains a lot of the weirdness from canon and it has interesting additions and interpretations.
I feel that I can't really do justice to this fic with only a review, but I'm glad that I found this again and that it has been updated.

This is such an amazing, interesting, and extreamly well written story! I hope you will continue to write it and maybe update soon!

Hi! I loved this chapter! The first part is bittersweet as always and I was so scared when they gave Luffy the first injection! Zoro crying must be horrible to see, knowing the guy, i felt so bad at this moment :( and I still dread what will happen next when they will arrive at the hospital: I can't help but wonder if something happened to Luffy and if the characters from the CP9 were there to warn them or to do something bad... I don't trust these guys ê.ê
The second part of the chapter was really nice to read! Chopper building a friendship with the others, the situation with Smoker (that part was so funny xD). It really brought me back when he joined the crew, with the conversation about why they all follow Luffy and how he learnt to know the group :3 and the ending of the chapter was really nice!

Thanks for sharing, I will be looking forward to read what will happen next! :D

I cannot begin to accurately express my excitement at the discovery of this chapter's existence.
I was innocently scrolling through the archive, looking for something interesting and then BAM. The Rememedy. Updated 16 hours ago. (My agony at discovering that I could have read it /sooner/?) Why did I deserve such a gift? hank you so much for updating, I am unbelievably happy.
Now, about the chapter itself, color me impressed! You managed to get all of CP9 into it without mentioning almost any names, crazy how distinctive people are in One Piece :) For that matter, I love all the cameos at the party! All the peole that showed up, like Dadan, and Koala- what the heck is up with Sabo? I don't remember there being stuff like that in previous chapters but it's hard to say, it's been a while since I read this thoroughly...
I'm really scared for next chap, is Luffy going to be already gone? If he is will Zoro be left behind, if he is he'll have to be knocked out, he'd probably make chase as soon as he woke up, or maybe he'd be too emotionally torn? I mean, he was just crying in this chap, that's pretty extreme... Maybe he won't be there, maybe he'll already be following them, or maybe it will be like Kuma, a sacrifice... Actually, I think CP9 is probably less ethical/honourable than Kuma, they'll have their target, not a substiute.
And Whoo! THe past! Know what I just realized? You write the present in past tense and the past in present tense, I don't knw if it's on purpose or what but I think it's really cool, I mean, you do have two stories going on, I always have a hard time deciding which tense to write in. I really like present because it sounds more urgent and striking but it's hard to work with in calmer scenes, it draws too much attention. (Not always, I didn't even notice here! Why can't my stories be more like yours? :/ )
But, back on track, the past! Chopper! Oh, Darling, poor, helpful but lost Chopper! He doesn't understand very much yet, does he? It's really sad to see how much he has matured since then. It must be very strange, writing the same character two different ways. I'll have to try that as an exercise some time, I bet it's a challenge :D
It makes me crazy happy to see Luffy so happy and wonderful and strong in the past, it revives my hopes for the present and reminds me what they're all fighting for, I wonder if they ever forget?
I wanted to ask you (If you feel like answering, I know you don't usually) If you ever wrote original material? If maybe you had works published? I realized earlier that I wouldn't know if you'd written something because it wouldn't be labeled with your username, if anything is out there I want to read it! So could you let me know? If you do or not, and if you do, what it is so I can go read it?
Great chap, in case you couldn't tell I'm super happy with it and absolutely ecstatic that you updated! Only problem is that now I have to wait again. *sigh* It's undoubtedly worth it for the length of these chapters, but it makes me sad. Nevertheless, I'm so happy that you updated and I wish you the best of luck on the next installment and all your other literary endeavors! Have a nice day!
P.S. Coby with a mustache? Impossible to imagine!

I just found this one today, I read it once and might have lost it. I cant really remmember in which chapter I was, so I'll have to sacrifice myself by reading this masterful fic all over again. Haha.
I'm happy it's been updated, your fic's the best!
And so sad, as well! :(

Wow, I left fanfictions for a few weeks to work on my exams and when I got back, I got two really long chapters of this story! That made my day, seriously! :3

As all the other chapters, I loved it! Things are really getting serious to try and heal Luffy, and we can really feel how stressful that can be for their group, especially Chopper. Chapter 23 was so bittersweet! The part with Smoker was great too, I really like that character, and the way you brought him in was great.
And for the part that happens in the past, it was so nice! I liked how you took all those elements of the manga again! Doctorine's farewell was awesome, and Chopper at the end was so cute, trying to say Sanji's weird word :3

Thanks a lot for sharing!

He IS a zoan! Oh, how wonderful! Well, not for Chopper, you know, but it makes me happy.
Have I mentioned how much I adore how oyu formatted the plot into real life? Cause I really really do!
(Also, Law, yes, let's)
Question! If Chopper made it and Robin made it (presumably both while young) why would Luffy have to face tremendous pain and all that jazz? Most of the old warriors in Alabasta made it and Pell and Chakra are still okay, so other than the delayed administration of the final dose of devil seed why would Luffy be any different? vivi was talking about some warrior who lasted ten days and ten nights or something, was that just a case where it didn't take? Confusion? Loving this anyway? Yes! But I'd like to understand, if at all possible, clarification coming in later chapters?
Also, COME ON JUST DO IIIIIIIIT, HE'D WANT YOU TO, EVEN THOUGH I KNOW WHERE YOU'RE COMING FROM! THIS IS VERY MUCH A SON OF A SON OF A SAILOR THING (yes, I am a pirate, born a hundred years too late) BUT THE BEAUTY OF LUFFY IS THAT HE'S SO BRIGHT AND THE WORLD BENDS TO FIT HIM NOT THE OTHER WAY AROUND.
That's how I see it anyhow, that's how I want it to be, they made it for a while didn't they? It was great for a while, hm? If they were happy wasn't it worth dying for? It is because they'er ready now to die for Luffy, to give up everything for him, so- so I just wish they'd seen that a couple years prior. *sigh* I love this story so much but it gives me anxiety, I have so many dreams for these people and I can relate and I feel all of their problems... I blame you for writing it too realistically, thank you for that.

YES. ACE. Yo, this got me all hyped, you kept me reading for another like, two hours into the night. :P :D I was subsequently overjoyed/crestfallen because there was no Ace in the following chapter, but it did leave Vivi's perspective behind, which I am happy about! Plus we get some Chopper action and that got me all excited. Me love me my Chopper. You know every time a van pulled up I was hoping for Whitebeard reinforcements, figures that Ace wouldn't come in a van but a motorcycle. I guess that's kind of how it had to go.

I've never liked Vivi a whole lot, unfortunately. It actually really saddens me because I think she had a lot of potential but I myself have never been one for caution and Vivi's worrywart attitude is always getting on my nerves. Thus, this whole section of chapters didn't really appeal to me, though I must commend you for your organization of the plot, half grouping Skypiea with Alabasta plus having devil seeds from there is honestly a magnificent way to change things up and keep em interesting. Though it does raise my suspicions, did you purposely not put Devil seed/fruit powers in from the start because you wanted to give Luffy an out? Or did you originally plan to skip devil fruits altogether? Things to chew on, I suppose.

Sorry, I'm not logged on. How do you give a character an epiphany, how do you write a realization when you have to know what they're going to realize before they do so your own moment is over and you can't copy it? Introspective, this fic, especially Zoro's perspective. There's so much meaning and none of it feels cheap or cliche, when I do it it sounds premeditated, purposeful, planted. It's not Truth, it's nothing but a simulation, glaring versimilitude. It's so hard to get deep without sounding like a cheesy card or the hallmark channel. I'm regurgitating Confucius or something. But your style is so gentle, it makes it horribly captivating. It feels like Im living this, it feels like you just transposed thoughts and feelings onto the screen/paper. I feel like this is some vicarious life, its touching, intimate.

I'VE THOUGHT THAT THE CHAPTER TITLES WERE SONGS IS THIS CHAPTER BASED ON GUSTER? DUUUUUUUUDE MY FAV BAND! YYYYEEEEEEEESSSS. I love that album btw, my fav song on it is Manifest Destiny, except for the F-bomb they randomly dropped in :P
I'm gonna go read the chap now, one sec, just, had to geek out there...
Mhm! The dynamics of the crew! So well portrayed!
Also, the cameos and parts of the characters we know. It's interesting, especially with the two-time perspective. Lucci was with Foxy initially, I think, and now he's with Krieg, eventually he ends up with Spandam. So, does he join up with someone else and that's when Luffy fights him for real? Or does he not show up again until Nami becomes a secretary? You're warping the timeline and a heck of a lot of events, so maybe Lucci won't fight Luffy at all, maybe they're quasi-buddies in this AU because of the whole saving him from Don Krieg thing. If they did fight does Nami know it's the same guy that she works with? Is Lucci helping Nami find Eneru because he wants to help Luffy or because he's in the business and Nami was asking around? It's all very complex, and you weave it into the most intricate of tapestries, in case you hadn't noticed, I'm impressed

Ah! The moment that makes a story or breaks it! This is what I mean, I so desperately wish I could pull something close to this magnitude off. This scene is iconic, which we all know, but somehow you told it as brand new, and your Luffy (very in character may I commend) held every ounce of solemnity and stature that he held in the manga and anime, which is hard to capture, this isn't science- often quality is lost in the conversion where mass can't be shifted, I wish I knew how to contain such components.
I think it's your simple complexity, I think I think things through too much, but when I don't think a whole lot my plot becomes a slot machine, most likely not landing on the right pictures. When I do think it's saturated.
Clearly you have found a nice towel for all your extra thought because you make it appear as though the story only fell upon the page.
Goodness, I'm in love with this piece.

It's brutal you know. This cycle, beautiful present tense setting, ends with something that makes me want to read more, start the older setting piece, long for the present tense, get hooked, reach the end, rush to next chap, yearn for past tense, get hooked, switch...You get the picture. It's such an interesting style, like, really! I'm really enjoying it, and it feels like an actual printed work, it's got such an interesting premise. Plus, you're vocab, and you're writing style! It's all so eloquent! So well put together! I'm jealous, really, I want to write like this, desperately- desperately. It's so realistic and masterfully done; my eternal respects. Now let's see if I can get out of this loop long enough to leave reviews at the end of each chapter rather than just inhaling chapters like some voracious literary monster.