Just found this fanfic randomly and so glad i did. It would be great if you update but I see the last update was on 2016 snif but please update i like this story

this chapter was great as always. but i see you haven’t updated since 2016, and i am sad. this story was getting so good. i love the interactions between allen and kanda. not the sweetest, but it’s always entertaining. i also lover that kanda doesn’t treat allen as an invalid. it looks like allen’s catching those feelings, too, haha! this chapter had a few errors like repeated sentences in random places, but other than that, fine. hope you update soon. don’t let a good story like this go to waste!

how does this story not have more reviews!? it’s so damned funnyyyyy! i love the arguments, the sarcasm! i’m in tears more than half the time, lol! and yay, more opening of feelings~ small, but wonderful~

being as petty as i am, i prolly would have just grabbed allen’s cane and flung it away. eff the public scene i woulda make, let him look for THAT, LOL. if he still hasn’t found it, i MAYBE would take pity on him, but he’d have to promise not to hit me with it or else i’m leaving, lmfao. i love their fights. makes their getting together later that much sweeter, haha!

i’ve had this suspicion since i saw what allen said last chapter, about being passed over for another surgery: is cross INTERFERING? i wouldn’t put it passed him! be’d want to keep the money banks fat. i already hate him. and LOL, tyki! just SWOOPING right in! also, that ‘WAGH!’ caught me off guard, i snorted so loud, lmaoooo.

wasn’t bad at all! just as good as the first! if not, even better! i cringe everytime lavi forgets that allen’s blind, lmfao. i dunno if that would be endearing or annoying to allen in the long-run? at least lavi’s treating him like any normal person who COULD see, right? kanda got such a short scene, though, but it was just as hilarious. i love their lover’s spats/quarrels, haha.

i LOVED IIIIIT! this was TOO hilarious. it wasn’t drawn out, either, descriptive while still getting to the point. a few of the sentences were a bit of a run-on, though. i dunno if it’s because english is yer second language, but try to use semicolons in some places. or full stop punctuations. for example:

“The dog woofed quietly in response, his master smiling as he returned to his book. His fingers finding the spot he left off, his lips passed a sigh as he heard people muttering around him. The whispers of the women as their heels moving over the coffee shop floor while the men kept silent as they most definitely stared at him. His fingertips slid across the table for his coffee cup.”

if someone else already pointed this out, i apologize! other than that, great start!

How could you end here? Daaaaamn. I wanna more!

now I just... I wait for the next chapter. One day it'll come. One day... soon..

This is too funny - I have like 5 screenshots from this fanfiction, all of funny moments. I'm ganna end up using up my storage...

It's not bad, it's amazing! It's so funny, I'm reading this at 9:52 at night and I'm trying so hard not to laugh

I'd really like to know what was kanda thinking while he was moving allen hand ahahah

Iwonder if Kanda is irritated by Allen because he's attracted to him

It's good! Thank you for the update! Hope you doing well now? Look forward for your updates! )

I'm so happy this has been updated! such an amazing story this is, the new chapter is wonderful!