I also would like an invite

The best story iv read in fanfiction thank u for the excellent story! If u read this be my friend! With much love from vanessa!:)

Quiero seguir leyendo

I have read your story at least twice... And enjoyed every part of it...

Wow, that was intense. You held me in suspense till the very end.

Thank you for this beautiful story! I really enjoyed it! Every part of it! Style, characters depictions, plot, dialogues... God, I am so overwhelmed!

This is such perfection. I can't even find the words to describe the feelings that came crashing once I finished. Everything, from their interactions to the growth to the spark of chemistry that bursted into flames to the very real attraction between them - it was so great that sometimes I had to sit back and reread the chapter. So sorry for not commenting a lot; it's a bad habit but I knew I had to say something when this was just siting on my favorites list for such a long time. It was a great read, and I'm so glad I found a story that adored both characters and made them grow in a way I could never imagine.

this is like. SKDJSHD ITS AMAZING. i love rivamika so much bec of fics like these

Omg this was amazing! I got hooked from the first chapter and read it all in one sitting! I ship Eren and Mikasa but dammit I ship Mikasa and Levi now just from reading this incredible fic.

This is so well written. The characters were so well done. The descriptions were beautiful. It just drew me in and I couldn't stop reading. One of those fics you never want to end because you feel sad at the end of the journey and want to read more about these characters.

I’ve read this fic so many times and cannot get over the fact that you nailed both characters. Best RivaMika fic I’ve ever read.

Oh man I hope that you don't have your profanity filter on because I can only summarize what I'm feeling right now in three words: Holy. Fucking. Shit. THIS STORY IS BEYOND AMAZING. Right from the first chapter I immediately KNEW that this was going to be a favorite. Pure raw emotion, vivid descriptions, and such exceptional vocabulary MY GOD I am so in love with your writing style. Your characterizations of both Levi and Mikasa really made my heart swell and I can just tell that you've put SO MUCH THOUGHT AND LOVE AND DEDICATION into this. You had such immersion into your writing I felt like I was in the room with the two Humanity's Strongest. You made sexual tension go on a completely other LEVEL without outright announcing it to the world. I am just so happy to have stumbled upon this story and to have been able to read it less than a day no less. I apologize if my sentences don't make sense and they sound choppy in some way, I just knew I had to make this review with the emotions I'm feeling right now whether on mobile or not. You are an absolutely brilliant writer and I cannot WAIT to check out your other works

This was so extremely good! I was worried at first, then got increasingly worried as each chapter escalated, but you pulled it off and didnt make me cry too much! Your writing is impeccable, keep the vivid descriptions. It's like having water with mint and lemon balm in it instead of just water; subtle hints of festiveness. It's really amazing that you finished this too; I can't count how many times I've devoted myself to a story and found it in the boonies of never-to-be-conpleted. Anyway, it's one of my favorites and I've read a lot. Thank you so much for contributing to the community and devoting your talents and ideas to making people happy; you cheered me up after a hard day. You're the best!

It is such a relief to find a RivaMika fic like this because:

1) They don't instantly jump each other. There is legit UST here that is sexier than plain old smut.
2) You write tension/suspense so well. I really thought one of them was going to die. I was on the edge of my seat. The plot is well-done, as is the character development.
3) Your writing in general is superb. You don't drown the readers in adjectives or adverbs, as if you're paying homage to Victorian literature by indulging in purple prose. Your style is concise and conveys all the necessary details.
4) I liked the dark and psychological elements.

Overall, just a fantastic story, and I hope to see more RivaMika from you!

I loved this so much.

This story is à masterpiece !