I loved this story so much when I first read it at the MRFFA years ago. Holly/Genki pairing is so adorable.

Aww... the end's so sweet...

sweet written goodness

good fic. Write more!

HI CP! That was great! I first started to read your stories on your site, but then I stumbled on to them here on . Your one of my favorite MR writers, keep it up!

Pheonix is a girl, you know.

Intresting, lack of faith returned. But where is the Phinox's soul? Muu's is in Holly's father and his real body is with the phinox's. So where his soul?

Poor Holly, her father is the enemy.

Oooh! KAWAII! I luv this, keep it up!

Awwwwww...CP...Thant was sweet. I really like the ending though. If only Meis was as nice as Genki...curse that womanizer.(I've been playing Thousand Arms for the last 7 1/2 hours, god help my sanity. But I recommend it to ANY anime fan! The scenes and voice acting are a close second to Lunar!, I know I know, I'm a shameless plugger, what can I say! _~)

That was so KAWAI!

CarissaP has done it again! Man, I LOVE your Monster Rancher stories! Hey, when are you going to update your site?

It's a good fic, that's all I have to say.

very touching; please write a sequel

CP, I don't know how you do it, but you've done it again! Very good, and I LUV the sweet ending! _. Holly and Genki 4-eva!