Reviews for One Step Further: The Start of the Fire |
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Silverwind of Forestclan chapter 24 . 4/20/2015 Is Grayclan even coming? It could be like last minute and they see the foxes fighting the Dark Forest and just join in. Plz PM me if you wanna talk about it. |
CameronNinjaDragons chapter 21 . 12/16/2014 Only when the wind is southernly? Is "southernly" even a word? |
CloudSkylark18 chapter 20 . 10/31/2014 Sweetness. Here's a clan and a warrior for ya. SunClan Human Name: Silvia Adams Warrior Name: Appleheart Human Age: sixteen Cat Age: seven moons Gender: Female Human Appearance: tall and slim with pale skin and black hair with red streaks. She has green eyes Feline Appearance: ginger and black she-cat with green eyes Personality: She is very thoughtful, always think things through before acting. She doesn't like to see other people get hurt, and she always fights for what is right. Bio: She was once a young kit named Forestkit, but she was taken by a hawk. A human named Silvia allowed her to be hosted in her body at the age of ten. Six years later she dreams of living in the forest surrounded by family and friends. The dreams confuse her, but she has taken them to heart and will do anything to find out what they mean. |
CloudSkylark18 chapter 19 . 10/7/2014 Nice. Again I so glad your back. |
CloudSkylark18 chapter 18 . 8/18/2014 Nice. I can't wait until the next chapter is updated. |
Skystar of the Ancients chapter 18 . 8/18/2014 YAY Your back! Great chapter! |
Skystar of the Ancients chapter 17 . 5/16/2014 I will miss you. |
CloudSkylark18 chapter 17 . 5/16/2014 okay can't wait until you get back |
CloudSkylark18 chapter 16 . 5/5/2014 isn't Yellowtail the one who killed them in the past? And this is really good. Thanks for mentioning that I gave you those three kits, and please continue |
CloudSkylark18 chapter 15 . 4/15/2014 This is really good. please continue. Also when do you think my OCs will be shown again. And please, please continue. Also you can tell everyone who gave you Flightkit, Shadowkit, and Swiftkit if you want. So please continue. |
Skystar of the Ancients chapter 14 . 4/4/2014 dun dun dun what'll happen? |
CloudSkylark18 chapter 14 . 4/4/2014 nice, and poor Jayfeather, and Briarlight. Thanks for adding my OCs I love them |
CloudSkylark18 chapter 13 . 4/3/2014 so is Lionblaze dead or is he still alive. please tell me. I can't wait to see Shadowlion's kit. continue writing this please. |
CloudSkylark18 chapter 12 . 3/29/2014 great chapter can't wait to see more |
Brightcloud0915 chapter 11 . 3/24/2014 just as good as ever. Keep on going. can't wait for more. this story is reaching the big climatic moment |