WOW! Just Wow! Unique, intriguing, captivating, heartbreaking, gutwrenching and poetic. I do have to say, I found it challenging but not in a bad way. I just wasn't used to such short chapters. I would just be getting into it and...BAM, chapter over on to the next one! It kind of felt like each chapter was it's own story within the story, if that makes sense!?

I really liked the concept of your story and it all flowed seamlessly and felt real, honest & believable.

Have now read all your ff's and have had a blast. Thank you for taking the time to write and post them and for feeding my R&I FF Addiction! O¿o Also for the many hours of entertainment and distraction :)

Hope all is going well for you and that we see your amazing talent back on this site one day soon *fingers crossed*. May the writing God's always continue to shine upon you and may you never be lost for words :) :)

Happy writing my friend, cheers xK64x :) :)

beautiful

Hey, I remember this story! Its been awhile and now its finshed, with I'm guessing Jane & Maura died in each others arms? It would be fitting with these two so much in love with each other. Goodbye ladies, see you on the other side...but not yet. *their beloved*

I love what you have done. I felt compelled to read from the beginning til the very end. Thank you.

Sweet and a little sad. Thanks for sharing.

Your story is a piece of art. Thank you for sharing! ;)

Ahh, very sweet ending. I'm glad Jane had rondo as a helper in the story. I really liked this. Thank you.

I really liked this story but I found it a little hard to follow at times. For instance, sometimes I wasn't sure if you were writing a flashback to the more distant past or to the time right before the accident. Also, it seemed like something's were cannon and other things were based on cannon but changed but I didn't feel like I had enough explanation of the ones that were changed to really follow what was going on.

I wasn't going to bother writing a review but I noticed that you hadn't gotten a lot of reviews and considering how much work you put into writing this story that didn't seem right. Plus I thought others might have the same difficulty I did with the story and that might be why they weren't reviewing. Anyway, this review isn't meant as a flame but hopefully as constructive criticism.

Crying into my cereal.

Just TOO sad!

So sad, so sad! Poor Jane & Maura!

Mkay, so I just read this chapter (without realizing there were 13/14 before it) and I'm... speechless. Sad and intrigued and longing and now I'm going to have to go back and read all the rest of it.

Very funny

Its a good story, but extremely drawn out. You might lose your readers if Jane shows no progress.

I'm sad to see you leave us but I hope you'll be back one day! and you've given us so much already so thank you.