Well, it's quite LOL in the sense that it took canon!Khepri (or close enough) to SI-herself to save the day.
Though I'm confused about other Endies having SI-selves somehow.
Namely because Khepri is NOT and Endy to begin with, even if she's mostly the Shard.
It's still not the same thing, right?
As in, Endies aren't actually human, never were, and (beyond some fanfics) never can be to begin with.
Eidolon merely controls them, they aren't him the same way Khepri is almost a Titan!Taylor for QA.
Whatever, though, it was somewhat FUN anyways.

Wow!
When I was almost going to ASK how the heck - and then you just TOLD this, loool.

This is really good. I had a lot of fun reading it and it’s given me some cool ideas for a number of my WIPs, so thank you!

Now make a Hentai version of this... WITH ALL THE GIRLS.

Considering the smut aspect of this. Im surprised you havent had her make a GIGANTIC Zerg solely for the purpose of *ENTERTAINMENT*

Very good! I’m favoriting this!

You know, you've done something that I have very rarely seen in my last decade and a half of reading fanfiction. You managed to fucking finish a story! While I would have loved to see this continue farther, I'm happy that you managed to create a nice short story with a neat conclusion. Good job!

I'd say she is at least part Master and Shaker

You truely should continue this book, its great! Good setting, good ideas, good char, bad part is you made the main a hero...zergish hero

Love the story a little more in-depth would be nice

This was truly beautiful. What a rollercoster.

Well that was awesome, if a tad out of nowhere

that is actually pretty brilliant

Endbringers are annoyingly hard to put down

huh... well that happened, i like it