wait dammit hit the post by accident but I mean really, you put in a sex scene with two teenagers of unknown age and said "fk it" with how biotics work (which I can understand for a crack story, but you made a gigantic leap that doesn't fit.) a proper backstory would have been much appreciated to what you cooked up

... so as part of a background, you don't even mention the character's ages and immediately

Good follow up chapter

Great first chapter

You could have them in a secret relationship where Jane would eventually become pregnant. Then they could use Biotics or some advanced technology to fix any disorders.

I vote for 1. Cause, meh, its better the Game of thrones.

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I didn't know they were brother and sister in the first place. If me they continue it into a secret relationship to only find out they demon was adopted.

Number 1

I am sorry to hear that. I to wanted to join the Navy. But because of my Autism, I was blacklisted from all military branches. Just know that you are not alone out there. There are many people who wanted to help our country. But because of the way we're born, we couldn't even get our foot in the door. I thank you for doing what you could to get into our nation's military. Please be safe.

great fic. cant wait for more rate it a 9 of 10 :):):).

Love the story hope you get better question is the story finished

don't listen to him. whatever he said, is nothing but a made up and here a tip. ingroe him pretein he don't exstite like he did not get born. he will give up.

Have the two Quarians break up with demon

Nnnnnnoooooooo do not take her back Demon and great story

PS you are eviljk