i like this story

Ch:6

This have to be the best story I've read so far that features the H.I.V.E. folks, by a landslide. Not that they are many, unfortunately, but still. It's pretty hard to find a good fic about the main characters, so imagine a good fic about minor characters...

The inclusion of characters linked to the TT canon but not mentioned in the show (or in the comic, in Shimmer's case) is a really nice touch and definitely helps to flesh the cast out. The very dark implications that the fic have at times are handled well enough to be believable.

Apart from the occasional small spelling inattention (I'm really nitpicking here, mind), the writing is really smooth.

Very curious to see how this'll pan out, keep up the good work!

You just keep cranking these out, yet manage to keep them entertaining and done well. Love the warning by the way, hideously awkward teenagers, and this chapter made me chuckle. No complaints here.

This is a reply to your question: Dont worry about your story, honestly I find it interesting and intriguing. This is coming from a person who is picky with stories to read. Lol but anyway awesome chapter, billy is sort of hard to write but i think you did awesome with his character :)) looking forward for more. Have an awesome day

Miss a week and you miss a lot apparently, four new chapters and a new title! You write the characters very well a bit of gritty realism, a bit of cartoon-ish humour, inspire just enough sympathy to keep us readers from abandoning them, but all the while reminding us that they are villains. I think I have less idea where this story is going now than I did before, but I'm sure I'll be back to find out.

I really like how you portray the characters :) awesome story im looking forward to more.

Looks good, hope you keep it going!

I like it so far got hooked. I adore the hive kids, too bad theres not many fanfics about them :/ I find seemores crush on jinx adorable haha it would be nice to see some romance between the too but anyway i whatever i like your style of writing so keep up the good work. Ill look forward to the next update.

So um... What will the pairings be? Because I won't read a Kyd Wykkyd centered story if it isn't KydxAngel.