This definitely needs to continue. I would love to see a different take on how the story ended.

Wow.

*bows down to your greatness* I am fairly new to Mergana fanfic, because I just joined the fandom and this otp has suddenly become my otp to end all otps, and your stories give me life tbh, you wonderful wonderful woman!

I'm speechless, it's been a while since a one-shot moved me in such a way, this is perfect in every way and you are an amazing writer.

And yet, that's how it did end.
WOW
That was utterly gorgeous, your writing is beautiful I envy you!
The alcove holds a soft spot in my heart because that is just their "thing" and I always wanted to see Merlin pull her into it once (and the show could've easily done it had they cared about giving anyone screen time besides Merlin and Arthur) but yes, if it had happened, this would exactly be how it would be, just like all the other alcove scenes you wrote as well.
Thank you for this fic, it was amazing :D

p.s the moment I heard "say something" it screamed Mergana to me too!

I thought I should give some thought to this review. The thing that fascinates me the most about the Mergana fandom is the unsaid, the nit picks that are laid around for people to discover. Your fic showed it beautifully, the quiet connection, laced with the tension that underneath all the hostility just meant something more. You do not get that upset over things you don't care about. They meant to each other as something significant, something that shaped their lives and that tension just transports all that on the open. That is why I like your fic. It retold some of the scenes with that underlining meaning out in the open for people to see and interpret on their own. To connect and understand that not everything needs to literal and that sometimes things that played in the dim light and tight corners are the ones with most meaning. Anyway, as you can see I loved it and the pacing of dialog is really well flowed and it never becomes tiring or something that those characters would never say. Hopefully this support can make you take time to write more about the Mergana. As you see, you have my support…

I don't even know how to describe it all. The ending was exquisite.

Oh my gosh you had an awesome ending! I mean, the whole thing was awesome, but I really liked the ending.

Great job with this!
June