It’s 2018 and only ten chapters! Feck you and feck your family!

Nooooooo. Only ten.
You are surely the master of Cliffhangers.

Well at least Velvet finally got to ask Jaune out. Took her long enough. Though she and Team RWBY will be in trouble because they hadn't done much on their essays.

This was the most aborable stuff ive read in along time so please update its been what 3-4 years so update

awesome job do more

Love it man but shit 3 years and still no new chapter? :((

OK at first I decided to read for some cute Jaune x Velvet fluff, but what I got was me being completely miffed... first let me just point out the biggest problem I had with this and that is what Yang and Blake did to Jaune, first off I know you probably did it for humor, but I am sick and tired of people in fics making Yang come off as a violent bully, because this is what they're doing to Jaune comes off as, bulling.

but my biggest issue was Blake, don't get me wrong I'm mad at Yang but with Blake, I'm completely livid, why? well let me put it this way, Blake constantly goes on about how she wants Faunus's to be treated better, to be treated as equals, so please tell me why she felt the need to do those things to someone who stood up for her kind and took a beating so one of her fellow Faunus's would be left alone, and after what he did for one of her fellow Faunus's, THAT IS HOW SHE TREATS HIM... I'm sorry but. F Yang and F Blake.

and you know what else... IT WAS COMPLETELY POINTLESS. no, really Team RWBY didn't help at all with getting Jaune and Velvet together, it was Coco... you might as well have made this a one-shot with Jaune standing up for Velvet, her telling Coco she likes him but she's too nervous to do anything about it, then Coco finds Jaune asks him to follow her, then she takes him to Velvet, putting Velvet on the spot, making her confess her feeling towards Jaune, then they both get together.

because really team RWBY did nothing and if you take them out of this you lose nothing... well apart from my burning anger and hatred to the point I honestly feel sick towards characters I usually like.

Cute & funny 10/10

this is extremely good! you really capture the essence of the chracters, i feel as if im reding a script for an actual episode of RWBY!

this fic honestly just makes me hate team RWBY.

Me need more Velvet. Gimme more Velvet.

Dude...this...is...incredible...please...update...like...as...soon..as...possible

I really love this and can't wait for the next chapter. P.S. Try to fix your spelling.

That...was not cool.

Now that someone mentions it. What if Pyrrha's name was a bad pun the whole time. A pyrrhic victory in winning Jaune's heart just before she goes off on that suicide mission. I count dying just as you confess your feeling for someone a Pyrrhic victory.