Hey, that's a cool idea!
I love your use of language, as well as calling them dovah (technicaly, I think the plural would be dov, but who cares?)
Great!

Hell yes

Oh my, I really, really enjoyed this!

I really like this. You handled Miraak's character amazingly well and those short kicker sentences filled me with such raging envy, lol. Your writing is just fantastic. I hope to see more of your work in the ES arhive. :)

not bad. Not the way I did things in game but I could see it. It would be a glorious battle I am sure with the two dovahkin fighting side by side.

Nice. I liked it. :)