Reviews for Undercover |
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Tropicallight chapter 1 . 8/24/2019 Lol omg that was freaking amazing! |
WinterCB chapter 1 . 3/18/2017 Oh, this is so damn funny! I just can't stop laughing. It is so like what Fuery and Havoc would do. Great work! |
bleeb90 chapter 1 . 3/13/2017 Loved it! |
0anhonestpuck0 chapter 1 . 7/26/2016 Hahaha oh my goodness this is an absolute gem. I can just see Havoc sitting back with a cigarette grinning away. :) |
Yla chapter 1 . 7/12/2016 Omg this was just so freaking hilarious hahaha |
ohmytheon chapter 1 . 7/19/2015 Oh my god. The team is so ridiculous! Poor Fuery! And Havoc, PLEASE. This was fantastic. I'm cracking up. |
Obsessed Dreamer chapter 1 . 4/21/2014 Dayum, that was hot! And hilariously sexy; I couldn't stop laughing! XD and that was such a killer line from Havoc! Haha! I really love how you characterize roy in your stories: he's an odd yet effective combination of silly, sexy, boyish charm, without losing his edge as a person in authority. Riza is also equally lovely: firm, cool and responsible yet playful and with a hint of mischief. She still comes across as all woman, with actual desires and real emotions. I really love their interactions and the lines you come up with for them. Yep, you guessed that right: I've read your other fics :P |
DeadFlash27 chapter 1 . 3/16/2014 omg! |
MissiB chapter 1 . 3/13/2014 PMSL! Dammit, Furey, why did you have to speak up?! Lol, I can't stop laughing. Poor Riza! XD |
Shimmerbreeze chapter 1 . 2/6/2014 XD |
fullmetalgrigori chapter 1 . 2/1/2014 Oh, God, I'm practically choking. Almost woke my roommate when trying to suppress my laughter. Loved it from start to finish! Killer last line, by the way. |
Queen Elenya Hawk chapter 1 . 1/29/2014 I couldn't stop giggling through the whole thing. It's so good! |
TwilightLove13 chapter 1 . 1/29/2014 This was perfect! Thank you! More maybe?! If not then this was still adorable and made my night! |
skele-gro chapter 1 . 1/28/2014 LOL the ending ;D |
staypretty79 chapter 1 . 1/28/2014 This was so funny! One of my favorites, and I was wondering when Havoc would come into play. I can't stop laughing! You should write more of their phone conversations! |