Well I just rediscovered this story and am surprised (and more than a little disappointed) that its now been a year without an update...
It would be a shame not to finish this story, it really is one of the better written Elsanna fics I've read (and I've read many). I wouldn't have guessed that English isn't your native language if you hadn't said so, and I like how you're taking the time to develop the relationship between Elsa & Anna. Too many authors rush into things, especially with this pairing, which especially requires a more delicate touch.
I know how life & things can get in the way sometimes, but I hope you haven't abandoned this fic and will return to it soon.

You updated! :D
I really like where this story is going. Take your time, and thanks for sharing.

Great chapter, thank you for sharing.

Nice to see an update. I like how the story and relationship is progressing. Its true that in this setting they would have to grow into the physical aspect of their relationship at a slower pace, so I agree with your thoughts on this. This still allows a lot of room to explore their interactions in a romantic & sensual level until they fully get there, and sometimes that can be just as satisfying if not more so, if done right.
Looking forward to next chapter.

I really do enjoy this story, and even though you say you're not a native speaker, you can certainly convey the emotions. I hope you get a chance to continue. If it's a beta reader you need, don't hesitate to pm!

I don't have anything in particular to comment on, except for Marshmallow's death, you bastard, I know every review helps so for my two cents, great chapter development, I re-read the entire story when I saw your latest chapter update and also say great work on character development and look forward to seeing how this war plot unfurls.

*edit* Actually, as I was typing, I can comment on how I appreciate how you took Elsa's Ice Palace into the set up. Most everyone else just comments on how it would be made of Never-melting ice or just completely cut it from the story as just a centerpiece on the mountain. How you describe it melting and how Elsa is forced to leave it behind sticks out. The way the Palace is melting seems to reflect on how slow she is in being able to fully let go of yet another facet of her past and a part of who she was.

Sorry, I just hate leaving vague comments without being able to comment on something, but I know how important a review can be, no matter the content.

Damn other countries, never seems to let them have their sweet times together.

Great chapter, well written.

keep up the good work

Nice update, did feel sad for Marshmallow though & thought Elsa would bring him back to life...
Look forward to another update & more Elsanna.

Like the story so far, though I wish the chapters were longer.

Anna baring her own soul and insecurities was so sweet, even more so since it's her war of telling Elsa that she's ok with what Elsa has told her. THey really are quite a pair!

Very very nice, I love the way you included Elsa's need to still be slightly alone. It's all she's ever known so it's sort of natural for her to crave it every now and then.

character death?! I hope it will be hans. Anyway, love this so far. Thanks for updating so quickly :)

Aw. It's really sad about Elsa's ice palace. Hopefully Elsa can fix it, right? . . .Right?

Wonderful story; thanks for writing and sharing! ;)