Thank you for the sweet story. Hope you have a nice day.

I'd rather read this than watch the original little mermaids and that is saying something I love this story and mice touch with the name meaning secret

That was an excellent story. You developed the characters well, wove a rich history behind the kingdom, and brought a rousing climax to a brilliant finish all in the space of seven chapters. It did feel a little rushed at points, with not all the characters getting the time I'm sure you would have loved to give them, but within the timeframe you had you pulled off a very engaging story with a wonderful message about what true love is. Well done. :)
(PS, I loved how Macchia Nera acted at the end there; it brought life to the character and kept the moment from becoming overly serious. Very nice touch.)

Hi there! So first thing first, I really love this story...and all of your stories, just basically anything you write! It's really creative and fun and lovely and awesome and I can't help but gush over it and hands down you're the best disney writer out there you just get the characters RIGHT while making them original and and and...I'll shut up now...
Truth is I read this when you first publish them on deviantart, but I didn't want to comment until you posted the whole thing (and a year later here I am (you can just punch me right now)) but got horribly side tracked and had to read the whole thing again because I forgot important details.
Read it and love it, I guess my only complain would be the villain...I mean he's not bad just a tad bit boring...for MY tastes I mean, I just prefer villains with a bit more sass and sadism in their character, that's why I like disney villains so much because, for the most part, they're bad and they know it and are not afraid to show it.
Anyway this was so much fun to read! Hope you write more in the future and are willingly to share with us! Have a good one!

Beautiful! You were so quick at posting chapters and updates for this, wow! Very impressive.

Awwwwwwwwww! :D That was so sweet! What a wonderful story. I'm glad I got to read it all.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

:O Oh man!

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

- That was sweet. Of course something huge will happen in chapter 6 and 7.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

:D The soccer bit was fun and Goofy being a badass in his own way was awesome. XD

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

Hmmm, Goofy's plain goofy as always. :D

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

Hi Goofy and Pluto!

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

Already the first chapter and the plot thickens. But I would guess as much from you, Dixie. XD

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

OMG, what an awesome chapter! I love everything about this chapter!

I love how Minnie and Daisy stand up for what the queen doing is wrong, that's awesome!

And go Goofy for declaring his love for the queen before it's too late!

And what an intense clamax too! I especially live the part that when the wizard revealed what Mickey really is, Minnie still loved him and was evenvbeating the wizard to protect him!

And I love the ending so much, it made my heart melt! I love how Mickey and Minnie reunited with each other and that they finally kissed! And I love how Mickey finally talks to her and tells her he loves her!

This story was awesome, I loved it! Thank you so much for making this story!

Awwwwwwww, Mickey and Minnie's relationship is growing. I especially love the part where Mickey tickles Minnie andMinnie cuddles on Mickey lovingly. So cute!

OMG, you have no idea how much I freaked out when the wizard came to the castle. In my head I was screaming "No, no, no! This can't be happening"! And he's doing this so he can take over both land and sea, and Mickey can't do anything about it or the wizard would erase his friends' memories of him if he does. Poor Mickey.

And poor Goofy too. He has to put up with the queen marrying the wizard now. So sad.
Just one more chapter.

Hooray, Mickey reunites with his fish friends!

I really liked how you made Mortimer here, because he isn't all gaga over Minnie in this and instead just want to use her to get the treasure. So I thought that was a good change.

And it's about time Daisy warms up to Mickey! I'm so glad she's now cool with him.

Go Mickey and the others for saving Minnie from Mortimer and Pete!

Awwwwwww, the part where Minnie got her birthday gift in the safe from her parents was really sweet!

Great chapter, the story gets more interesting.