| Reviews for The Seven Crimson Keys |
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RyuAssassin chapter 4 . 1/29/2019 This is great, keep it up One question, will Lucy become Master for all Servants or there will be other Masters in Fairy Tail? Will Natsu get a Servant? Still good job. |
Guest chapter 4 . 1/1/2019 Please update! I’m loving it! Can lancer and Lucy maybe have some romance? Or maybe put the next key as Archer. |
Tempest-Rage chapter 1 . 10/14/2018 pffft just Angelica and lancer need to use Gae Bolg? pffft |
Tempest-Rage chapter 1 . 10/14/2018 hmmm, is it just me or the cu chulain is too weak here? |
DragonEmperess chapter 4 . 6/19/2018 Make more it's awesome so far and there isn't enough servant action |
DragonEmperess chapter 4 . 6/13/2018 This is great need more chapters and more servants involved like Gilgamesh and king Arthur |
Guest chapter 4 . 4/18/2018 Keep going with this fiction it's good. |
Guest chapter 4 . 3/9/2018 Please update! |
Z.L.C. genesmith chapter 4 . 3/5/2018 So, which crimson key is Lucy going to come across next, I wonder? And which heroic spirit will appear next? Maybe Lucy is gonna wind up being called Mommy! Hahahahahahahahahahahah! |
Bravemaridin chapter 4 . 2/28/2018 Loved it! Please Update soon. |
Guest chapter 4 . 12/27/2017 Please update! |
Midnight49 chapter 4 . 12/26/2017 CAN’T wait until Lucy either finds another Crimson Key or she finds another Servant to fight! It’s gonna be so cool |
Midnight49 chapter 1 . 12/26/2017 Cu Chulainn has been acquired by a fluke but still Lancer as the first one to join I can see that really happening. |
tsukumi nightwalker chapter 4 . 12/20/2017 I really love this story! Though I do have some advice to offer. First, I noticed that there may be some romance between Lancer and Lucy, if so I'd advice for you to take it extra slow. A lot of fanfictions I read lack that, they tend to show that Lucy(since I read a lot of fanfics involving her) begins to realize her feelings way too early on then tries to hide them for a certain amount of time before finally confessing or the guy finds out. It's rather cliché... Just take it slow and let their relationship build if Lancy (new ship name that I just made up) is what you're leaning towards. Second, I also took note of that you're not using her celestial spirits as much. And though yes, I understand you want Lancer to get in on the action and maybe it was just the arc is why you didn't really implement them, but I advise for you to use them a bit more. Third, it seems a bit odd to have people of Earthland to know about servants and stuff. Like the worlds they come from is quite different from one another, so unless Lancer or some other servant told them then even the slightest bit of information about servants is rather weird for Earthlanders to know on their own. Lastly, this is just my personal opinion, but in the Erza and Lancer fight, he seemed a bit too OP. Like no doubt is he strong, but so is Erza. You kind of ended the fight a bit too early. Anywho that's it. This is my favorite fanfiction and I REALLY hope to see you continue this soon 3 It's so good that i'm about to have a few friends of mine and some people in an anime community i'm in read this. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! |
The First Hero King Gilgamesh chapter 1 . 10/25/2017 Saber modred Caster gilgamesh(alot less arrogant) Assassin scathach Beserker asterios Rider iskandar Archer kid gil or oda nogabuna |