Weiss i can't deal with your bickering because that jackass Jacques put a sniper on the 50th floor far right window of the schnee corporation,s hq aiming in here in my office may I add in on the 50th floor of the Blackwood weapons manufactureing hq hold on * takes out a high caliber sniper and aims at the sniper and fires killing the sniper whilst said sniper was drinking coffee * anyways I got to call your father about or deal

shes gonna be the very best

so shes going to look at herself? oh the critcism

The hell I just read?

WHAT velevt you piece of scum i thought ren wrote it to irritate weiss

HA! so the true culprit was Ren

I absolutely loved this chapter! I feel like Weiss was soo loved! And To Weiss, if you are reading this! YOU ARE LIKE MY FAVORITE CHARACTER AND I LOVE YOU AS A CHARACTER SO MUCH! And say hi to Ruby for me! You guys are my favorite people in Rwby!

-Julia

I wonder, is this supposed to be a message that, people who write revenge five deserve to be beaten up?

Yukari Takeba from persona 3! I wasn’t completely sure after the description but then you mention high school was life and death, but the finnnal push was when she began introducing her real name!

This is the BEST version of Coco(s) I have ever read man. Hope more are coming up in other volumes.

Silly weiss. Nobody reads fanfiction because its realistic. I need only 2 words to prove my point. Overprotective yang.

It would be funny if fanfic authors didnt do those things. Absoloutely awful spelling despite spell check being readily available and making characters fall in love completely rushed. I mean seriously nobody meets someone and declares their love the next day.

This is my favorite chapter so far lol. I died laughing when Nora took down the marine! Sabers descriptions of her friends is spot on as well lol they both are definetly dunces.

Holy crap, I just realized GreatMoonGuardian is Minato. He must be doing some stuff to put Persona stuff in the RWBY-versd.

Didn't like the antic war arc, as you could probably tell with my past reviews if you have seen them. But as a whole, this entire fanfiction was very much enjoyable if not slightly predictable due to jokes being constantly repeated.

I would give it a 8.5/10. Could easily be a 9/9.5 if there was more reacting of games, movies, shows and so on. Most of the fanfiction reactions can be hard to understand unless you have the other fanfiction open up in another tab, sometimes I can't even find the other fanfictions that Weiss reacts to. Not only that, there is far too much reliance on overused jokes in order to force comedy in. Yang commenting about flat chests every chapter is not the best-est of comedy, especially as nothing ever changes. Manliness Blake is often too exaggerated for a little comedic effect as well and there are many other jokes that were funny the first few chapters, but quickly became stale.

However, I feel that if I was to be writing the same thing, I would definitely not be able to make it nearly as funny as you have done here. I can notice what is bad about this (in my opinion), but I do not claim to be able to do any better or improve what is bad (in my opinion).

I have Fav'd this fanfiction. Moving on to the 2nd volume, 100 more chapters to go. Then 50 for Volume 3. So many chapters...