Great story! Thanks for sharing!

Really cute story! Loved it!

This story was amazing! I hope you continue writing you are very talented!

Awesome story. Thank you!

Enjoyable story and characters. Loved it, thanks.

Great story

Well that went from F to Z in one chapter. Hun?

Thanks for your story.

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Em & Rose aren't in it? :(

I think that is the very first M rated story I read where there was no lemon at all. In all of the years I've been reading fics, that has never happened. That certainly isn't the reason I read fics but, you headed there quite a few times and never went the whole way. It's just surprising. I loved that they aren't having children. Hubs and I went the child free route and couldn't be happier with the decision. There was a lot of unfinished things in this. Lots of little things you brought into the story, yet never expanded or, finished them. Wondering why they were even brought up now. Hoping you may have a sequel to this hiding in your library.

I didnt think that was the end of Jake but, from your a/n, I guess it was. I am starting to wonder if there is a sequel to this story. There is so very much unfinished in this and the next chapter is the last chapter. Hmmm? Onwards . . .

I am surprised that Eric was being a dick at the bar as well To the customers. Shame on him. Those reviews on Yelp can seriously kill a business. And, you can't remove them. That's horrible. I hope that Cullen's put out an official apology and advise that they've removed the 'problem'. I'd love to think that was the end of Jake but, I don't think that's the last of him. I somehow think he'll do something really stupid.

They were really cute together in the morning. Loved that she called him out on breaking one off in the shower. Whether he did or not, that was funny. The stealing of each other's food and the commitment to one another. She even called her brother and set up a date. Progress all around! Only three chapter left . . . how will it all wrap up so soon? Eek!

I was expecting something far more damaging than his girlfriend fucking the head chef. I thought he may have been engaged. Maybe even married. That sucks, don't get me wrong. The way he was acting was far worse than just finding her bent over her desk. I did guess correctly that he was acting so evil towards Bella, because he was attracted to her and she's too close to the family. Yay me!