great story. reads like a piece of art. i have no problem with nanashi's character, as i find it to be very realistic.

Your way of writing is actually More amazing than ever! The action was great too! Though I would hope if you can continue writing, but it’s your choice! I love this fanfiction!

Wow this story drew a lot of emotions from me. The writing is more amazing! This is my favorite and best naruto fanfiction I have read.

ahh wow i walked into this read that angst tag and was like eh i'll be fine
haha no
but anyways i was pretty surprised by this fanfic
it was leaning more to the shorter length of the fan fictions that i usually but dammmnnnnnn that sure packed a punch. it was hella condensed but strong.
great job!

wow imagine giving up all the eyes and giving them to danzo. really dumb move, izanagi is useful as fuck. imagine doing it for political favors you can just mindfuck danzo into doing anyway. wow those eye would be useful as fuck for orochimaru too.

i legit can't handle the edge. treat these reviews as a badge of honor for writing the edgiest story i've ever read.

imagine using a murder suicide of your loved ones to advance your goal and still think you're a good guy. try not to cut yourself on this edge

I tried so hard
And got so far
But in the end
It doesn't even matter
I had to fall
To lose it all
But in the end
It doesn't even matter

It hurts me good. Thank you.

Bruhhhhh this is so good

I love your writing style and the use of nursery rhymes made this chapter all the more interesting and creepy. 3

I must say, this is by far the most divergent from what most tend to write concerning SI/OC characters I've found and I love it.

I. Am. Speechless.

this fic is AMAZING! I love Nanashi, her character is so refreshing even if it sounds kind of dark

SO SAD! I cried so much. This writing/story is really good! I totally support you! And the action wasn't bad at all! I love it!