What an enjoyable read!

Awe. Man, I feel so sorry for poor Luffy and Sabo

Bloody hell you are good best one shot yet tbh i dont read many but when i saw how long it was i freaked out i was so happy. It was hella great I love this i cannot believe teach was such **** like not even bad just out right crappy trash ughhh luffy is a ball of sunshine this was so painful but enjoyable to read well done :) YOU ONLY TOOK A MONTH EVEN GREATER WRITER THAN I THOUGHT it would take me at least 2 so

That was awesoooome

such a fantastic fic, so much angst, seriously loved it

amazing story XD

AMAZING One-Shot! You're a great writer! Keep it up!

Honestly this is one of the best things I have read on fanfiction, it is amazingly well written and the story is one of those ones that make you feel kinda empty when you finish. I can't wait to read more of your works

Nicely done, and some great brotherly fluff. Perhaps a little surprising that Luffy still some sanity left after being experimented on for 8 years, but he is generally pretty resilient. I am a little surprised you didn't in some fashion tie some devil fruit abilities into it (beyond the hint of the drug's effect being similar to Gear 2nd), but it worked well enough without such things. I'm also rather glad that the romance didn't quite work out as I really don't think this story needed it. Thank you for writing and posting!

This fic was amazing! I really like the mix of fluff and angst in this, and the way you introduced Luffy and his background. It was subtle and yet effective, and I really liked the way you wrote the flashbacks. Thanks for posting this!

i really enjoyed reading this story. great work!

Huh
I see what you mean about the ending, it felt unsatisfactory somehow, but I still love this so much!

Omg i enjoyed this story do much. You did a great job

...AMAZING. Wow. I'm freaking speechless.

This is the first time I've read one of your books, and I dare say it won't be the last.

I loved it. Everything is flawless. Favourite fanfic to date. YOU are an amazing author, and I hope you get told that often.

Thank you for writing this.

Aww I love the ending so much! They deserve this! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS WONDERFUL STORY!