Reviews for Detour
RedRose206 chapter 1 . 5/10/2015
I can definitely see this kind of thing happening in the show.
Laora chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
CATHERINE

WHAT IS THIS XD

This is just so ridiculous like what

It's exactly how the Fentons would react to this though, like EXACTLY and they just jump right out of the GAV without any further questions and all but attack the poor desk girl and now I'm imagining you handling them at your job and I caNNOT STOP LAUGHING

this is just. So wonderful I have lost the ability to even think straight like THANK YOU this is literally the greatest the description of everyone's reactions to the pile-up was kind of the greatest but the bit in the museum was EVEN GREATER and this is just

one huge pile of perfection like what

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Ansa88 chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
BWHAHAAHAHAHAA. OH MY GODS.
OH MY GODS.
THIS.
so much funny.
:3
love the fact that maddie is the one naming it, and danny and jazz are just "really...really...*we're so used to this that we don't even say anything"
also, that "reading sign wrong" would be something i would do, especially since i keep losing my glasses. -.-
summary is the best thing EVERRRRR.

unrelated note: got a puppy, probbaly gonna be busy, but feeling much more...lightened? depression and puppies don't play well, and puppies tend to defenestrate depression. *grins*
but lots of work, lots of poop, and lots of pee.
Above the Winter Moonlight chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
Okay this was kinda funny. Very good though and happy third year anniversary on FanFiction.
The Cinderninja chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
I CANNOT BREATHE.
I CAN'T EVEN BREATHE.
I HAVE CEASED BREATHING.

"Why can't we just hop over the accident and have the road to ourselves?"
"Because that feature isn't ready yet…" Maddie replied absent mindedly.
Oh gosh. Oh gee. I can't even tell you how much that one line made me laugh. I sounded like a crazy person oh gosh I'm cackling so hard.

And then. THAT WHOLE CONVERSATION. WITH THE POOR DESK GIRL.
I HAD ACTUAL, PHYSICAL, TEARS IN MY EYES. I STILL DO, A BIT.
I honestly started laughing so much I think my rats are terrified they both ran and hid and now they're just staring at me because I cannot stop shaking. I don't think I could even begin to tell you just how much I reacted to this.

And it's depressing how completely accurate this is. This is... /exactly/ what would happen. And I feel awful for Danny and Jazz because oh gee they literally have the most embarrassing parents in the world.

And you're absolutely right. There needs to be more re-series stuff. Thank you for bringing this to my attention. I suppose it's time for me to start outlining their ghost-riddled childhood. I do remember about two years ago wanting to do a series of stories about summer vacation with te Fenton family pre series...

Dash
ghost squidney chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
Ah Hahahaha. I see what you did there. "K. Daver" mmmhmmm. Great job! Funny, cute, all that. :D
MsFrizzle chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
Congratulation on your anniversary. You have written some wonderful stories. I too have found fanfic to be an unexpected source of friendship and encouragement.

Ha, ha...clever name.
PuzzlerthePony chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
Hehe, I liked it.

It was a good, silly story!
Watson Baker chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
Haha Oh my I can't stop laughing! I haven't read Danny Phantom fandom in so long so I needed this :) Is this a real painting? It would be awesome if it really was. Glad to read your stuff again!

Baker
SwimmerGirl96 chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
I love this! I could imagine every part of it happening in the show!
Deborahpflover chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
Okay this was really hilarious. It's really fun to see some stuff from Danny's 'normal' life. I can totally see this happening.

And of course; Happy Third FanFiction Anniversary! :D
Invader Johnny chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
No ghost? My snow White ass there isnt one! I mean come on! if a painting its called "Haunted" its indeed a big indicator that a ghost is around!

Invader Johnny Signing Off.
QueenyLeAcH chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
Oh my gawsh. That was hilarious. XD