Nicely done and a good way to address someone wanting 'fluff' :)

Great story!

Welcome back! Glad to see you're writing again!

As always a throughly enjoyable story. Re read again its that good.

Just happened on this - needed a quick SHADO fix! I haven't been on here for awhile but was feeling nostalgic... You are a very, very good writer! I did go to your website to finish this story. Very well done - I think you have Straker down pat. And it was amusing - i.e. fluffy - too!