Please cone back and finish this ive read it a few times and its brilliant what happens at the wedding?
Kudos from tbe UK
Mx

Nooooooooo, it can’t end there! Your story is too good for that. Would love to see where you go with it and see if Olivia will tell the truth to Alex about Abbie! Please come back...

A charming collection of sweetness and recognition of a great relationship. I could go for more.

uuugh there should be more! But these 10 chapters are just awesome and fill me with lots of pretty butterflies. thank you!

I had to reread from the beginning, because I had forgot of this story. Hope you write another chapter soon. Maybe the wedding gives Olivia an hint?

can't wait for next part

Liv should have said no. That was unfair of her to put Alex in that position. Loved the update.

Woah! What a setup- love it!

Loved this!

Okay this chapter hit a special spot for me. I've always enjoyed their age gap and assumed they were roughly 7-8 years apart. I feel like when reading stories though it's a completely ignored point and for good reason-why bring it up since they're both mature? But this chapter brought it up PERFECTLY. You addressed the age gap, Alex's young beauty, and made their ages clear and different enough to make a point (i.e. 30 and 37 doesn't sound as different as 28 and 35). I personally find a thrill in the older/younger aspect which made me love this chapter but then you also made it about Olivia's insecurities and Alex comforting her in the perfect way. Absolutely wonderful chapter. Probably my favorite short story that I've read on fanfiction and trust me, I've read a lot! I'm also a writer for this pairing and will gladly say this is much better than anything I've ever written.

Well structured, lovely humor - great writing. Keep it u!

look forward to more

Glad to have this one back. Thanks for keeping us entertained!

You're back... Lovely chapter

You are an amazing writer! I love the way you constructed the sentences and set the tone for the story with your words. I'm in awe!