Beautifully written! One of the best romances on Merlin Fanfiction! Loved the conflict, the love, the children, and the humor.

Love the way Arthur comforted Merlin in this chapter!

oml i love how they kept saying "little one" instead of child or baby or kid xD

Arthur is a freaking a-hole, pardon my French. Every single race, MERLIN'S mother hugs him. Then MERLIN'S mother gives him a celebratory dinner and they talk about how he did. This race is the FIRST time, Merlin, a racer, gets to hug his OWN mother. Effing Arthur better piss off.

*steam blows frome ears*

Haha, sorry but after reading so many fics where Merlin basically kills himself for Athur, and then Arthr acts all pitiful the one time things don't go his way... Well I think you get my drift.

Anyway, second time reading this fic, and it's just as fabulous as ever (aside from the few occasional grammatical errors that are really too small and scatter for me to point out specifically).

Will probably continue, once I finish seething at the - well let's be honest here - utter PRAT.

Ta ta, dearie.

-Kangarooney-

Well, this was a great ride! I loved every steps of it! Congratulations for finishing it !

Great job I would love to see what the kids are like in high school and on the track.

Absolutely love this story from start to end I'm just sad it's over but it was such a great read :3 you did an amazing job and I look forward to reading any other writing you do later :)

OH, WHAT A BEAUTIFUL ENDING! Oh, that was fantastic! But does it have to end? I was really enjoying the story...

Okay I love how cute balin is but I realllllly want Merlin to race again because it's so unfair because he's he better driver and yet Arthur's the one who gets to race. Please let Merlin race!

Loved it! This is so cute! And loved the angst (yes, I am a bit of a freak too).

Yay yay yay yay yay... *is jumping up and down and clapping my hands* I love this story SO much! Like, seriously! Love it! But you had better not kill Merlin. Or you will die with him. I swear, all the really could stories kill Merlin in the end... Don't kill Arthur either!

Oh my god I literally just read your entire story and it was perfect. I laughed out loud at the funny jokes and I was sooo sad for Merlin and Arthur at the beginning. And the suspense was perfect like, amazing timing. A little miffed at Arthur being the father though, I would have preferred Merlin but hey, that's just me. I love all the characters and the dynamics and how you included elements and names from the tv show and added them it. Overall it was brilliant and I loved it and I wouldn't change a thing. Amazing.

SO CUTE! Eeeeeppppp!

Awww this chapter had all the feelz in it love it n the fact they have a baby now :3 maybe we will be able to continue to read about there lives as parents maybe they will have another one in the future and I wonder if there son will also like racing like his dads :) great chapter can't wait to see what you do next

If you kill Merlin... *glares threateningly*