Hope Minato dies. Have him eat a dick, choke on shit, and castrate him. Then make him squeal before killing the fucking cocksucker.

So is the story still active or is it abandoned because it's been awhile since this ever got an update to this story

Ok so your writing needs some serious reworking but the story as a whole is quite good but the writing and the quotes are wrong in spots the spelling needs to be double if not triple checked but again it is a good story just make sure you can correct it I'm sorry if my review comes off as me being an asshole but I try giving both harsh and constructive criticism

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The idea is not bad, and I have always liked the narratives that become emperors or kings that ridicule everyone, it is not the most fascinating and it is not that I have the best plot but it entertains ...
To make this story suffer from going too fast. That palpatin did not die? Well, that I use force to call a soldier for help picking up a ship? Striped a little but I accept it, that palpatin was too old? ...
Already, the canon says that he has at least hundreds of years preparing his plan for the Sith Empire and although he drew a little ego, he did quite well until that moment.
there would be puestor that palpatin had been erected during the fall, or that Veider pressed to hit him a little more, making his withdrawal a little more credible.
Be sure that the fact that gods suddenly appear on Sidius' face is a loose resource, considering that we have the star use of being wars for when they need a Deus Ex machina
"the force turned me".
and you need to develop the things you write.

What you need is a beta, one who's native language is english, to help spellcheck and fix the massive grammar problem ya have here. I like the idea, when I can understand whats going on its amazing, and I like how the story is going so far. Also, you might need to read up on more star wars information. There is no main hanger chair, the main hanger of a star destroyer has no windows, and ya need to add a bit more information. Like in the first few chapters. How did he get another Death Star? Did you mean Star Destroyer? What all did he learn? Things like these. Fix the grammar, misinformation, missing info, and you have yourself a great story

This was a great chapter I can’t wait to read the next one

Your Grammer and general English needs work and you also need to learn to fill out your descriptions more it gets confusing and I have to reread to make heads or tails of what your trying to convey... Now I know my English is bad but ehh yours is worse

damnit. i hoped to read more chapter. the story is really good.

hello are you still alive?
is this going continue or not

Why must you leave us like this? :(
I must say that this story is very interesting and well doon. hope to read the next chapter soon, and wish you the best of success with your works.

some parts are copied by another fic lol

A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.

naruto never became jirayas student

This is not good,I'm sorry.