I can tell you were running out idea cuz gosh this story REALLY takes its time. Its like im watching a train wreck in slow motion.

Um, actually thats not true. Humphrey was not forced to leave the pack. It even talks about that later. At least in the movie, leaving the pack was totally his decision because he just couldn't stand living there with his true love with someone else. He didn't have to leave.

wow, this was a great story... i hope to see more. as always, keep up the great work! :D

Really nice story there :)

I've enjoyed the ride and most of this makes a great alternative ending to the movie.

its delish and hilytrtye notrash

She Is In It, I Watched it

This story was just great, I loved it one of the best, shame there won't be a sequel though, keep up the great work anyway

muy buen capitulo, fue una gran historia te felicito

Another great story!
It's great to see a dedicated AO author who finishes his stories.
Love the inspiration for this too, muse is a personal favorite.
Not sure about your new idea, just cuz I don't like anthro's much, but if anyone can pull it off i guess it's you...
I would really like to see another one of those stories where Humphrey gets on the train and Kate has to find him (With a HAPPY ending)
Throw in a few plot twists, and a battle or two, a couple OC's and you've got a story...
Anyway you're the author, and I never would have enough time to write anyway :(
Thanks for reading this long ranty review :)

Regardless, keep up the good work (and it really is good)

-C

P.S.- you're the one who got me into fanfiction.

Well like I have always thought Chris you do the A&O series justice and another great story and ending as well, well done mate

Well done. Another perfect ending to another perfect story. It's those darn Humphrey and Kate moments that get me every time...Anyway, there was nothing wrong with this and it ended up working all the way through and every single thing was in great detail. So again great job on yet another great and successful story and I can't wait to see what else you have to offer in the future. Keep up the fantastic work my friend and I will c ya in the next one. Have a great rest of your day.
Thanks,
The one and only,
-FanOfHumphreyAndBalto

That was surely great one! Gotta admit that even though they had their fur's all groomed up it was messed in the end again :D I was kinda hoping to see more Jake stuff in this chapter but we can't have too much at once, right? :D No sequel? Damn, I was living in hope a while there :P
The story in whole thing was awesome, it was nice to see that there were few OC's in there too :) It made it even better that it wasn't such a simple thing to do and there were more problems getting to that final chapter :)
Please, set that Omega's pride in stone. I would love to read more from you! :D ( I gotta wonder how you are able to keep on writing stories even though you have plenty ) Gotta say that you're one stubborn author in my opinion :) See ya again I hope! Keep that awesome work up!

That made me want to cry. In a good way though.I love when it works out in the end. Great ending, the story was amazing.

Great story

This was an awesome story. I hope you make a sequel :D