Slightly heart breaking, but very well written and lovely to read.
Great work!

What a cool POV, I love it!

I think you really, really did a wonderful job with this story. It touched me deeply and I enjoyed your writing style with the beautiful and kind of poetic air to it. And it wasn't OOC at all.

An interesting and moving piece of work - thank you for writing and sharing.

Not really OOC, makes sense. Well done.