Reviews for The March of the Black Queen
Nathalbama chapter 15 . 7/2
Keep up the good work and I can't wait for more I really want to see the what happens next
Abyss Trinity chapter 15 . 6/21
I'm glad that this is not abandoned and happy that the supernatural side is coming up. Thanks for updating and awesome chapter :)
Nihil Asara chapter 1 . 12/12/2019
Ah. went back and saw your note about English as a second language. Guess my only advice then would be to keep it simple. Right now it feels like you wrote this using a thesaurus and a poetry primer with a fair number of outright mistakes, all of which make the whole thing rather hard to follow.
No fancy vocab needed, just write what you know. Don't have to be Shakespeare.
Demonfan50 chapter 14 . 10/29/2019
DANG IT YOU ENDED IT AT THE CRUELEST PART UGH! Amazing stuff tho had me on the edge of my seat dying to read more I love fics where the person is evil.
Abyss Trinity chapter 14 . 10/28/2019
Well I'm glad that this isn't abandoned :) And can't wait for Jade to start the quest for magic power and more power expanding in the criminal underworld. Soon she will have to kill people herself instead of having others do it. I would imagine that the Agent Jade in the future that's no more is experienced with that, I doubt the agency would have let her in if killing was an issue for her. Especially since Jade is the type to be in the thick of things. Thanks for updating and awesome fanfiction :)
Guest chapter 13 . 9/24/2019
Really cool. Wish there was more. I am loving it.
Darkness Rissing chapter 13 . 6/20/2018
Well new badass name, new company, and calling on arms for enforcements (aka minions lol) seems that Jade have take well her new role as “evil” queen (umm Murderers? I wonder why she need assasins?)

Lol funny thought...since she now own a comic book company, she could order make a “Jackie chan adventures” comic book (she have the trio to tell her what was going on with the bad guys)
Thread6 chapter 13 . 5/30/2018
Ha ha. Figured that Jade would finally willing to get killers. It is only a matter of time until she goes that route. Out of all of the business that she would buy out I did not think it was a comic company. Also I can see her ruthlessness and yet inexperience she has in negotiating. I can tell she is going to be a fearsome regardless of what happens to her. Good job!
Serekai chapter 13 . 5/25/2018
Nice work !
I really love the story, with Jade starting her empire.

It's a great story, with a nice evolution of the characters. It's a pleasure to follow it !
shadowrunner22 chapter 13 . 5/25/2018
Nice to see this story updated, hopefully Jade can keep up the winstreak also will there be char. death happening, I hope since I haven't seen that in any JC fanfics
Abyss Trinity chapter 13 . 5/25/2018
Glad that this isn't abandoned :)
Ganzademon chapter 12 . 3/25/2018
Can't wait for the next chaptor en more please update soon love this story
Eduard Kassel chapter 5 . 3/23/2018
Interesting. Black offering to restock them so ably was surprising. not that he offered but that he is able. I suppose he looked into the possible need to produce mystical matters quickly once he learned the truth of the situation?

A chapter of fallout and transition really.

Finn stood out here. It was nice to see him able to move on and thrive. And surprising to see him again in the alley. Incidentally I appreciated Jade's squick reaction and decision to prank them.

Jade press ganging Finn was a nice touch. Forcing him back into the criminal life after he makes it clear he wants to stay legit is a good way to show she is not some noble demon or anything. Our little Jade is a villain and trampling on people.

The rival antique dealer was an excellent use of canon materials. Though unlike Jade I find him a bit illegitimate having the old school look but behind the scenes being more tech savvy. Eh, maybe its just being an Uncle fan? i wonder if he will stick with Jade? He has power and Jade is an active threat.

Well anyway good chapter, thanks for it.
The Sorrowful Deity chapter 12 . 3/3/2018
Best way for Jackie to beat Jade is to say he has the high ground xD
Thread6 chapter 12 . 3/3/2018
(Insert evil laugh here)
Another good chapter. I can see the quality even better with your skills. I have to say that Jade makes a good villain. All the learning and building. I also love the part about needing a secretary. To bad that ruling also include politics. That is going to be a nightmare depending on her rule but I can see her vision for the future with armies and research both magic and tech(electric swords!). She is about to step into a whole new world. Also introducing new players for both side is good to considering the dark events about to take place.

Are they still in the United States or are they in Europe? It seems they are in a different country but I could be wrong.

This is good and I support the good work that you are doing.
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