hey there! it was a nice fic. I enjoyed reading it. keep up the good work...especially with the jelsa cliché! ;)

I loved this story. Well written and you really grasped the personality of the characters

Oh my gosh I loved this story and it's been a while sense you wrote this story but, I think you should do a sequel and you don't have to but, it would be amazing if you did ;)

Awwww I love this story. This is totally adorable. Love the happy ending. 3 oh if you have others story. I'm definitely gonna read them. Sincerely Madison aka GymnasticsRules101

Thanks for a great story! I loved your well rounded ending as well ;) xx

LOOOOOOL

This story was really amazing! Please write a sequel :)

ohh jealousy... i like it so much haha

Elsa's a very rational girl and I could see her making the same decisions as your Elsa here. No worries she hasn't gone ooc... even Jack... I like your narration it's like a pro..

Beautiful!

Wow, this is by far the most in-character Jack/Elsa fic I've come across. I loved every chapter of it! I especially loved how the drama flowed so smoothly, with just the right amount of angst to tug at the heartstrings without making it overly melodramatic. Very well-written. Thank you so much for posting this 3 You've made this fangirl very happy.

Marshmallow we'll miss you ;_;

SEQUEL ,NOW!

Great story! I really enjoyed it, and have grown warm to the pair of jake and Elsa. You wrote the story well and hope you continue to make more including this pairing!

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