| Reviews for Demon Take Over |
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   Awesome Eason chapter 11 . 1/1 Dude awesome and dhope story wow. Can't believe the awesomeness so far this story is super cool I like the deal with Lucy an Jackal. Finally an author who makes the type of fan fiction I've been waiting to read for so long. Than u for making my day with this story thank you |
| Guest chapter 13 . 1/2/2019 i thought i had a dark mind |
| janembajuice chapter 13 . 12/4/2018 To have completely discontinue this story... You are in fact a sadist in many ways. Whenever you find it in your heart to update this fic, I must ask you keep Titania alive. Otherwise, I'll lose my will to read any more. |
| Christina chapter 13 . 10/14/2018 I'm so happy you updated this I've been waiting for years at least a good two, or more and I check all the time |
| Logich chapter 13 . 8/27/2018 Man, a cliffhangers. I hate it. |
| QueenDemon777 chapter 7 . 8/16/2018 Eww! Natsu you don't belong to Saliyah, you belong Lucy! Oh...I know *Summons my sword and slices Saliyah in half instantly killing her and laughs evilly* That's for Era and Natsu! |
| euu chapter 13 . 7/27/2018 oque, cade o resto? |
| demonic hellfire chapter 13 . 4/2/2018 Not the thing to say Erza he might turn you into a demon in response. |
| BLADE OF ILLUSIONS chapter 13 . 4/1/2018 You really like leaving cliffhangers. please do continue with the story |
| FanFictionHunter chapter 13 . 3/19/2018 Hurray! I won the bet! Really hoping Erza sticks around. |
| im ur misconception chapter 13 . 3/19/2018 well damn, wild. That's a hell of a chapter to come back with. And omfg. character death. nice. |
| Billy grim chapter 1 . 3/19/2018 this was lit, but God I hope Erza doesn't die. I can't have the love of my life go through that Hell only to die in the end... But great chapter, glad to see that you still writing |
| LyHy chapter 13 . 3/19/2018 Oh my! Why my feeling got hate towards Sayla |
| Natsu is Awesome chapter 13 . 3/19/2018 Oh shit, you're not dead. I gotta pay that bet with FanFictonHunter now... Glad to see you back man. Let's see how your chapter is. I kinda forgot all about what happened last, but seeing Mard and Silver in ditches brings back memories. I like how you just call him Etherious. Every other author has referred to him as End or END, yours just feels nicer to hear... Or would it be read? I know we've discussed how this story will go and a bit on the end, but I actually can't remember it at all. Though with your track record of killing Erza's babies, I wouldn't put it past you. You say new seals were applied to Sayla by Etherious after he removed the purple ones left by Mard and Zeffy, but didn't describe the seals Etherious placed on her afterwards. A few grammar mistakes. Franmalth was a she when they bowed. And Kyouka had perihelia vision instead of peripheral. Hope to see more soon! |
| jennifer chapter 12 . 12/31/2017 repost! |
