Reviews for Invisible Frost |
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![]() ![]() I don't even know if that was counted as a happy or sad ending, but nice one! :') |
![]() ![]() ![]() Derp, you forced a kiss on her. ;p |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome just awesome are my words to describe this awesome writing . YOLO and LOL ! :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() DAMN! Girl, this story is 10x better than mine! Mine has 120 reviews while yours has only 18?! You need more for this amazing story! INSTANT follow! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww *fainted* next chapter pleeeaaasseeee :D I hope for the best end for jack and elsa (﹏)/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww. And what Anna said came true: someone outside the family loves Elsa - someone with powers similar to hers. Yay! I can't wait to see how this turns out. Perhaps Anna will start to be able to see/hear Jack , now that she knows he's there and he cna only be seen/heard when someone believes in him. that's be cool. Though still a little awkward if other people found out: the queen falling in love with the spirit of winter. That's something else! I can't wait for what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh oh, what does jack want from Elsa in return for unfreezing the kingdom? My mind is coming up with some stuff but I want to see what you chose to happen. I think it'd be awesome if Anna was listening on the other side of the door. It seems like something she'd do. Gosh I hope the people aren't too angry about the snow. This is just worsening her relationship with her people. And there's no way they'd believe that Jack Frost, a supposedly mystical being, was actually the culprit and the only reason he froze the whole kingdom was so that he could get her attention. And if they did, I can just imagine the looks they'd give him ('like seriously?' 'this boy is so lovesick' 'have some control!'). heeheehee! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, so cute. I can't wait to see Elsa's reactiion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww I don't think it's too rushed :) I was very excited to see that you updated! Can't wait to hear more |
![]() ![]() I love how jack said "I love u" at the end of this chapter. Wow,you really di love cliffhangers Anyway write soon XO zoe |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey cmon. we totally care. lol ;) |
![]() ![]() XD poor elsie... please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have no idea how this jelsa thing is gonna work, you know jack being ageless and all. lol but I hope you make it work, update soon. ;)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the way you wrote this. Its lighthearted but well-written. |
![]() ![]() I wonder what... :) ( pls update soon! ) |