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Yes I got a question will goku ever teach his men how to shoot out ki and will they get stronger and will they play a important role in Z

Aw man... I read the part where you said the next chapter would explain how Goku became "Commander Goku" and got excited, then I read the part where you said you weren't going to post anymore and got sad...

I have no words to describe how much the conversation between Ambrose and Kara actually makes sense and moved me. I look forward to seeing what this "family" does in thhe future.

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much better..

why TF is it that even tho the chapters are short, u end it not even in the middle, and the rest is just u talking in ur notes? I'm here to read the story, not a million announcements!

Hmmm, it would appear that you have come out of your retirement from fanfiction.

awesome chapter when is the next one coming, and what will happen when goku meets raditz?

While I'm certainly relatively new to your account, I can say without a doubt that your work in this story and in Turbulence is among some of the best work that I've read.

I really do hate the fact that FanFiction writing, for you, became more of a chore that put so much strain on you, rather than being a hobby that you genuinely enjoyed, but I honestly wish that that didn't happen.

You really are an amazing author, and if you ever do find that spark for writing Red Son and Turbulence once more, you can be absolutely sure that I'll be one of the first to read those updates.

Please come back.

I hate that you just...ended here.

Every time I find a really good DBZ fic on my own (as in, it wasn't recomended to me) it always gets abandoned.

Come on man, why! This was so cool! It had an awesome name! It had an awesome premise! It had EVERYTHING going for it!

;_;

I cant believe i found this story so late, it was so good, but i can understand why you would want to quite and for what its worth i hope you find happiness in whatever you do.

Good luck my friend, i salute you.