Wow. Your story and writing definitely deserve so much more as a review, but I am blown away by your OS... I always wanted to find a story depicting the Time War and I am so glad I found yours! Your description of the battles, weapons and time-lord traits are the best! I've always found the line of the 10th doctor about the Fall of Arcadia (and later, his mentioning of the Nightmare Child and so on) to be very powerful. I am truly feeling the scale of the War in your story. I'll be doubtlessly re-read it countless times after I've sat on it for a bit.
Thank you SO much! This was fantastic

That was complex and powerful and stunning.
Just breathtaking.
I've reread it 3 times now and it's still so overwhelmingly... brilliant.

Wow. (I think that pretty much sums this story up.)
I honestly can't quite come up with words to describe this (in comparison to my undoubtedly more erudite fellow reviewers). Mind-boggling, delightfully complex, brilliant and breath-taking all seem like suitable options.
Your writing style is stupendous
I won't pretend to have understood everything (I'm one of the people who call themselves a Whovian but haven't watched much of Old Who) but you seem to have conveyed a much more (dare I say) accurate version of the time war in my opinion compared to Day of the Doctor
I'm going to go and re read it now
Thank you

Words cannot describe how beautiful, wonderful, and mind boggling this is.

Thank you for writing this fic. It's aaaaaaammmmmmaaazing.

Thank you so much for writing this! This is the first time the Time War has matched my sense of what it would be from the hints thrown about in the show. The Day of the Doctor (much as I am ok with the set limitations, and war of any kind is horror) didn't really convey what I had imagined-a war inconceivable with its distortions and perversions, and the way they must be felt by beings sensitive to the temporalities of the universe, dimensions, realities; everything dying over and over. But you managed so well!

Also in conveying how the Doctor perceives the universe, and how he has been distorted by events, and what that makes him. Kudos!

Love, love love this story! You really got into how much time can change, how the War could have played out and really, just the alieness of the Doctor. Sometimes people forget he's an alien but you brought it out really well. I hope you do another!

My favorite was where the Doctor continued to experience various timelines at the same time and how he can see how any of them can play out!

Very well-written. You dealt very well with the collapsing timelines and the War. Good job :)
And though we may be small in one sense, in another, we are very, very big.

I rather like the concepts you have addressed in this piece, concepts such as the way the Doctor see in possibilities then picked the one he likes or suite him and the way you touch on the fact that he does like earth rather fondly and could sacrifices other beings for earth sake. It is rather sad and yes we are very very very small in this universe.

Fascinating story.

Wow. I have to applaud you for your style of writing and managing to keep all of that straight in your head. It really read well, like some of those classic sci-fi novels. And it was a good representation of what a war of /time/ might be like.

I love both the hard science fiction and the Doctor's alieness. I found many others humanize him too much.

This a fantastic story! Your "timey whiney" explanation is one of the best I have ever read. In fact,
I have saved this story and intend to re-read it, and probably re-re-read it. Thank you so much. I
hope this will not be your last Dr. Who.

Excellent, brilliant, well done, I love it. I prefer your version here to what's been done to the show lately (although I'm consoling myself by being sure that the minute Moffatt gets bored with THAT, he'll change it all. Again). Your version matches up with several private theories of mine, so I was delighted to see those bits in here today - especially that the Doctor 'pulls probabilities', to borrow a phrase, until he finds one he likes best, and that's how so many improbable things happen around him. I look forward to coming back and reading this again sometime soon. Congratulations on an excellent story on a very difficult topic to get a handle on.
Thank you for sharing this story with me. And other people, but I can only speak for me right now.
Le'letha
And most sci-fi writers do have no sense of scale, I must agree. The best ones sort of do, but they're careful about sweeping statements and exaggerations. The worst have no sense of vocabulary either, and at that point you may as well just pack up and go home.