Reviews for doing more harm here than slander and lies
MC chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
Really good version of olivers thoughts for that episode. Enjoyed it. Good job
No.1TwiFanpire chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
This started off so funny I thought it would have a different ending then the sad one the show had. This ep upset me I was so disappointed when he slept with Isabel. Great job though :)
moemish1 chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
omg i hope you conitune this maybe throw in a little Barry Allen...
dafaolta chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
Good job getting into his head. Now if we could only figure how to get him out of his own way...
procrastinationismyart chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
I loved this! I feel like you really captured the charaters authentically and I'd love to see your Oliver internal monologue on other scenes too :D
js chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
Oh my God, this was an amazing read - you solidly get my vote for the award for best Oliver thought process! Very addictive read - Oliver amused, confused, ashamed, and so forth - love how you tried to explain away what was really going on in his mind relating to that really intense episode that was almost a significant marker in the relationship/friendship/ship that is olicity. Love it.

Well done my friend!

jspider
onetreefan chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
good and sad. :)
Brokenangelsely chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
This was perfect. Getting inside Olivers head was...just awesome fic!
Kotay chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
Good story! Please write another Arrow fic!
BeBrezzy chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
lol olivers "if i were sleeping with her this is how id do it" moment XD and aww, the las bit made one of my eyes tear up for a second! great little one shot :D
michelle chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
wow, this was so much fun to read! :)
i really liked how you used lines from the show (all the parts where the characters spoke out loud) and wrote your story based on that existing framework. hope you do more! :)
ChiefPam chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
This makes that episode much easier to think about, so thank you! Also you had me LOL at the "feeling awkward about only one team member at a time" line :) Because, yeah, what the heck was Isabel thinking was going on? Very well done. Thanks much for sharing :)
shepweir always chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
This was a believable explanation of what happened I enjoyed hearing Oliver's thoughts, feelings, and especially his regrets and insecurities they seemed so him
itsalwaysfour chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
That was absolutely gorgeous.
iluvtorun chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
This was very well done, and pretty much spot on with what my silly shipper heart hopes was his motivation in that ep. Loved it!
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