I like the light-heartedness. A lot of times people think of sex as inherently raunchy but it doesn't have to be. I actually like it better this way. I would've hit Percy with a pillow too, though. A few times. xD

The last sentence made me cry.

Percy needs a PUNishment ; D

so fun and so hot the same time worderfull i like it so much
thanks for this and one last thing i think that the puns of percy are awesome xd
Maryginnybonnie

woah

better great very good history is successes

Did you mean to make a Firefly reference at the end there, or was that a coincidence?M

Funny, Sexy, Perfectly Percebeth! :D

Bitch!

This is half awesome,half-oh fuck it,screw this dumb pun.

Again, beautiful balance in your writing. This was very sweet and funny.

I loved the puns
esp. "aye, aye, captain"
and I really hope this one was intended because it was awesome...
"I really needed to come up with a way to keep his puns at BAY"

Thank you again for writing,
I can't wait for you to update again,
MG14

-also your writing is some of the best writing on this cite and defiantly the best I have encountered in years... Your stories have be a welcome distraction from studying for my midterms.

Thanks again and please keep these stories coming.
MG14

Have them caught by Malcom and Malcom tries to kill Percy