J'aurais aimé que tu aies fini cette histoire, c'est génial

Great Story.I love powerful Chris.

Awwww - come on - are you ever going to update this story? If not then at least have the decency to tell us why. There is nothing more frustrating that someone writing a story to a certain point where you have the reader (me) wanting to read more & then you as the author just leaving it for years on end.

Do you think that is fair? I don't.

Please More Please.

Its almost 2020 - any chance you will update after chapter 7

Can't wait to see the next chapter

update please

Such a pity this good story isn't continued, at least until reveal...

I'm really sad that you never finished this story. It's really good, and I would have liked to see where it was going.

There are, however, many issues with grammar and spelling, or more accurately using the wrong word in place of the word you really mean. For instance, you said that Chris had fasts amount of power; I'm pretty sure the word you wanted was "vast". There were a few others that you used a couple of times, however, without rereading your story I can't remember what they are. You also use the word "safe" instead of "save" nine times out of ten.

I also think you went a little overboard on the amount of powers Chris has. I don't mind him being closer in strength to Wyatt (because I do think the show ripped him off in that aspect) but to have his power be more than the Charmed Ones as Greek Gods is a little much.

Overall, I would really like to see you finish this story (hopefully with fewer grammatical and spelling errors, though).

Love it. Can't wait to read more.

I wish you would've finished this story, it's brilliant

j'adore cette fiction je la trouve bien écrite et fluide les événements s'enchaine correctement et je trouve le thème original il est vrai que sur la série Chris a était très voir trop indulgent avec sa famille j'espère avoir une suite un jour

Ugh! Another story that couldn't get to the f'n point, like revealing who Chris really is! Then the dumb way how Piper, Leo and Phoebe gang up on Chris. Should have revealed who he is in the third chapter, cause everything after was just a repeat of the last one in a exaggerated way that never forwarded the plot or get any close to revealing who Chris is. Read it all the way to the end and it was an unsatisfied read.

I love Chris so much, he's my favorite Halliwell. This chapter was so good I clapped lol

Side note, in the line "She tried a kick to his head but with a speed Phoebe never held for possible he evaded the attack," I believe you might have been going for "never had thought possible," with a comma before but and after possible. Though I could be wrong...there's also other possible autocorrects where Chris is raising them "of" the floor instead of "off" the floor, and of him only caring that they are "save" instead of "safe." :)