I enjoy this story a lot it is a unique take on the bellamione ship but I feel that Hermione seems to be too perfect in this story and she does not have much flaws which is noticeable tbh like everything falls in place for her and even when she meets bad situations she always gets out with little repercussions which is a bit unrealistic. But other then that this story is great and fun to read.

You can tell the writing is good if someone’s read it multiple times but still feels there’s heart beating out of there chest you did a amazing job I know I’m a bit late to the party but I had to let you know

I feel like almost everyone is praising this fic, which I don't really understand tbh. To start with, the misspelling of (almost) all names from the HP universe, even original characters(!) ruins the immersion somewhat. The plot is kind of a mess in my opinion, with some stuff just ignored after it happens. The inclusion of the oc Brady is something that seems totally pointless, I don't think he actually did anything worthwhile except tagging along with the others, and he wasn't explored much at all.

I loved this story. So much. It was everything I expect from a good fanfic : creative, daring, sexy, well-written, complete. I loved every single moment of it and read it in two days only.
The major malus for me personally, as a French girl (sue me), is the way you believed putting sentences in a vulgar web translator could give you some refined french (or that we can't pronounce 'th' to save our lives, but again, director's choice. Very cliché). French is a complex language and a translator cannot in any way express the subtleties of genders or grammar, let along english sayings that don't mean anything put in french.
Well I suppose it wouldn't be problematic at all it you didn't use it that much all along the story, but anyway.

This particular put aside, I greatly applaud your work, you kept me hooled. Thank you.

Bravo, a wonderful story that i spent 14 sOdDiNg HoUrS reading. truly fantastic work.

why did they think that hermoine would be mad? like what logic would u need to follow in order to think that? literally makes no sense for everyone to react the way they did and it was so annoying that i ended up skipping like half of the chapter to get all of the nonsense over with seeing as it was blatently obvious where it was all going. Honestly i could have skipped this chapter and the previous one and have no problem with following the story it was all so predictable.
with those scathing remarks said and done with i would like to say that belamoine starts! and the author is really good at writing them in character (though perhaps its too early to say anything for bella)

I'm quite concerned about the dub-con borderline rape and how it's portrayed in a romantic and acceptable manner

Wtf Fleur raped her, and gets away with it?!

Lols still a stupid little girl

This was one of the best stories I’ve read

I haven’t even finished this chapter and I’m crying from laughing so much.. and poor hagrid for having to listen in on their experimental fun during the last chapter.. you’ve done well I must say

I am so glad Hermione finally goes to see Minerva; Bella had to wait so freaking long and deserves some happiness finally...

It's been so long since I've read this and I'm still loving it! I was in the mood to read some good Bellamione and here I am. I hope you both are doing well

This story is so random it's hilarious.

I spat out my salad. Holy shit