The ending was cute! I just had a little trouble separating the book words from the fic's own text.

That was really great. It was a great way of revealing to North what Jack had been through.

Aw... That was a sad aw, by the way, not so much a cute squealing aw. Sad, because this story made me sad! Which meant it's doing it's job, because if it wasn't good, then I wouldn't be sad, but the fact remains that I am sad. And this story is the cause of it.
Wow. That was... that didn't make any sense. Sorry.
Okay, so good job writing this story. It felt like a somewhat gentle punch to the stomach when I read the part about Jack's grin not reaching his eyes. Don't know why that particular line hurt so much, it just did.
I sort of can't see Jack pointing out his problems like that, but at the same time I can... Hm. That doesn't make sense either. Well, anyway, good story!

As I read this, I couldn't stop linking Leo Valdez and Jack Frost together.

I love this story! I'm defiantly going to remember the stuff in here for my stories about Jack! Also, I would like to know you you copied this stuff off a real book. Not that I would ever read it, but I'm curious.

So...so deep. That was sad. North, why are you so blind?! ; _ ;

*heavy breathing* I'm fine. See? Completely... Fine...

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW, I feel the tears coming, *starts to cry* that was so beautiful and sweet that I am speechless.

Wow. This is so deep, I've never seen Jack's time alone portrayed like this before. This is just an incredible story and they are both in character the whole time.

Finally someone called it out for what it is. I'm shocked that Jack isn't crazy.

:( so cute even though I was face palming and screaming at North basically the entire time

I agree with AyameKitsune-this definitely needs to be continued with the other Guardians.

Ok, this needs a sequel with the other guardians please!